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| "School Days" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2007 20:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's so funny that I'm reading this story and listening to at the same time Lil' Kim... (Don't ask why. LoL!) QUOTE: "Well she said `if you think I'm going to marry you with that so called ring you're sadly mistaken'." Takeru said while laughing. "Then Matt said `I've invested too much money on you, for you to say no, so you better damn well marry me'." LOL!!! that was funny, and just like Mimi!!!
| Reviewed By: Ace94d [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 17:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Alright, three great new chapters! ^_^
| Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 18:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Paper airplanes? People still make those? (LoL!) I've been noticing this story for quite some time, but until now I never read it. The summary caught my attention so I decided to give it a-go! Heck, you commented on my style of writing, I perfer YOUR style of writing! It puts mine to shame! You actually have a lot of talent! I liked the beginning how you made the students seem like a bunch of mitfits, but at the same time it's obvious that the students really care about how people perceive them. (Even if they pretend they don't.) Well, I'm off to review chapter 2!
| Title: Go Everyone Go
Reviewed By: digiyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 21:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GO KARI! AND GO YOU!
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