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| "Flying Southwest" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: konekocat [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2008 04:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow. I absolutely loved this! My favorite part would have to be Axel's analogy between Celtic Frost and the Sistine Chapel xD I really like your writing style. I really need to work on NOT saying what the characters are thinking. If you had an ff.net account, I'd totally put you on my favorite authors list! I don't usually do that after reading only one of an author's fanfictions :D ugh. It got cut off! Sorry about that D:
| Reviewed By: konekocat [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2008 04:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow. I absolutely loved this
| Reviewed By: ntc [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 06:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I stumbled upon your fic coz Dualism, the almighty SGW-writer, pointed me in your direction. And i have to say, i'm glad she did! love your writing style. love the fighting words exchanged between our two male protagonists (or, more aptly termed, antagonists). love the underlying chemistry too. Quote "Ladies first." "Then what are you waiting for?" Unquote. This is really wonderful stuff :) and the other sentence that really amused and impressed me was 'Roxas thought of hands, pleasantly husky voices, and body heat. Then he thought about the reek of public toilets, disinfectant, the loud complaints of passengers and the possibility of arrest.' it's all kinda... restrained (i can't find the right word to describe it), but the humour and original voice is definitely there. i like it. anyway, just want to thank you for the fun read. keep up the good work! i'll be surfing around for your other fics. cheers
| Reviewed By: cleartempest [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2007 22:00 CST
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Haha! I love this! Are you gonna continue it or is it just going to be a short one shot? Anyways, great job, very funny style! XD
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