| "Spiraling Out of Control" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2008 03:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sounds interesting. UPDATE IT! Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Soliderboy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2007 23:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really good update as soon as possible
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Reviewed By: ledfan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2007 20:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
cool story looks promising. keep going! :d
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 23:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Come on and get off your ass and update this story I cann`t stand ppl who start a story but never updates hell if you weren`t planning to update then why write a story oh well i`m not going to ask you to update because I now you won`t so i`m not going to waste my time
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 14:36 CST
Comment/Review:
Come on and update I want to know what happens next what will Naruto do when he finds out his mother is still alive will he accept her or not so please update the story
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2007 13:47 CST
Comment/Review:
I guess that was pretty good I like the idea Naruto`s mother is still alive and really strong I guess but where has she been all this time and I haven`t seen that show Bleach I guess thats what its called so I don`t anything about it oh well I hope you will update soon because I would love to know whats going to happen next and what was Sakura`s reaction to what Naruto`s mother said to her and why couldn`t Lee see anything oh well PLEASE UPDATE SOON and kepp up the good work
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