Reviewed By: xXx_Wings_of_a_demon_xXx [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 13:23 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: Yah, it was corny. But atleast it was a cute corny, not a dumb corny. It was more a study, or description of thier feelings that an actually story. I agree, kind of pointlesss, but It really does set you up for a nice story. I love the style of writing. it's very nice. Some of your sentences could be contrued in two ways, which I found intruging. keep working at it, I'll lok forwards to your other work!
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