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Reviewed By: sasori-kun [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2009 19:47 EST
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this chapter was fun to read. and i would love to be your beta
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Reviewed By: NikkiV On: August 24, 2008 10:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic. Normally I won't read a series because the author never finishs it but I just had tor ead this one. Please don't be like everyone else and stop mid story. Update as soon as you can please. ;)
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Reviewed By: MasterTDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2008 17:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I docked you points for the late update. I love this story so please continue it. Update Soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: jadelotus On: August 15, 2008 02:45 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely LOVE Naruto in this fic. Normally he is really annoying, but he is just too SEXXXXY! Please update NOW!
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Reviewed By: SakeNaru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 19:55 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for writing more!
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Title: awesome!
Reviewed By: gazerock On: June 24, 2008 16:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter! I cant wait for more!
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2008 01:42 EDT
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This is getting great! I'm way glad yous tarted back writing again. All is forgiven. Just keep up the good work. All of the things you placed in here makes up for it.
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Reviewed By: Luna_and_Artemis [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 14:39 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! A new chapter!! You hadn't updated in almost a year. I feared you had given up on the story. I love this fanfiction. It's one of my alltime favorites. I reread it over and over again. That's how good it is. I absolutly love the new chapter. Please update again soon. I hope 10 is the highest rating cause that is what I was trying for.
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Reviewed By: Archer271188 On: February 27, 2008 01:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhh that was hot. The sex scene wasn't as bad as you think though, I little rushed maybe, but definately satisfying. I'm glad you updated. As for the spelling and grammar, when you're reading the story it doesn't take away from it, and there's nothing glaringly obvious so don't worry too much about it. Please update when you have time!
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Reviewed By: Yaoi_Perv [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2007 02:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write more of this yummyness!!!!! I need more!!!! I really like this story! I wish he could just end up with all of them...-wink wink- Anyways....Please update soon! Doing Great! Have a good one! TA TA!
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Title: LCAR
Reviewed By: LCAR [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2007 21:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more i need more
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Reviewed By: foxyval [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2007 22:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yowzah! I think I'm suddenly a NaruShika fan. Yesterday, I read this story as a last. After getting on after my nap (I don't get real sleep anymore; it's always 1-to-4 hour naps), I went straight to this fic AGAIN.
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Reviewed By: shinobicows [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2007 20:31 EDT
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PLZ UPDATE!!! I love this fic and I REALLY would like to read the end. Plz don't drop it like so many other authors do to great fics like this. I would be forced to cry... and things get ugly when I cry
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Reviewed By: Kakashi Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2007 23:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omfg you have got to update. i absolutely love it! and hey that has got to suck that your parents found out you write hentai. i think my parents would kill me...owell. hey update soon and keep making awesome stories :)
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Reviewed By: Ciiah-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 20:35 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutley loved it. ^^ The whole "Naruto-in-heat" plot is actually nothing new, but your fic seems a lot more orginal than a lot of other Naruto-in-heat-fics. ^^ This has got to be the hottest fic I've ever read. Or at least among the hottest. I love harem-fics, and this is a perfect one! :D That lemon was amazing, and I really liked the fact that Naruto made Shikamaru cum twice! I simply adore this fic. I'm so adding this to my favorites. Oh, and btw: You're one of my lemon-senseis now, just so you know it. I admire your ability... Dear lord... I haven't been this excited about a yaoi-fic in quite a while. Good work! Update soon, or I will die. *joke* :3 *chu*
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