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Reviewed By: ApatheticBlackMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 02:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God this was hot can't wait for the next chapter must write more!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: HOLAD
Reviewed By: MaskOfMe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2007 21:07 EDT
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AHH! You gotta update. The others need some luvin' too ya know! XD
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Reviewed By: Miko_Snow Godess_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 06:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!! You're a great writer and I love love love this story, I can't wait to read more! Plz update again soon.
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Reviewed By: narugaa On: July 18, 2007 23:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
do you hate why won't you update
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Reviewed By: SakeNaru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 12:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like it keep updating. I really like the idea of naruto and shika.
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 16:34 EDT
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I liked the chapter, but if you don't like it then just try to make it to your liking on the next one. I hope you update soon and can't wait to read it.
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Reviewed By: HOWL_TO_THE_DARKMOON [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 18:16 EDT
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uuuuuhhhh!!!!!!! please please please update !!!!! I absoluteyl ove it~!!!!!!!!!!!! I really do. please update soon!
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Reviewed By: HOWL_TO_THE_DARKMOON [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 17:41 EDT
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OMG i was cracking up in my basement when i read the part where they have to go in the mansion adn how tsunade just was talking then suddenly fell asleep. (OH and i love how naruto's pants are hanging low on his hips, you hsould havve someone draw a picture of it and post it on deviant or here) laters smiles and walks off
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Reviewed By: HOWL_TO_THE_DARKMOON [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 17:32 EDT
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i love the part where he's talking to Kyuubi in his room and kyuubi keeps calling him his kit. and then the fuzzy redglowingpicture of him curling aorund narut soooooo kaiwaiii!!! I absolutely love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: armybrat14 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 15:17 EDT
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hey i javen't read your story and i don't think i will just because i don't really care for sex scenes which yours sounds like to have alot of. i just wanted to ask u to please edit your summary! i saw it and i fell off my chair!!! kids come on this site and i think it's a really bad influence on them if they see that kind of stuff, so just cool it off a little and put something like "yaoi-lemon", thank u!
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Reviewed By: Dream Keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 21:46 EDT
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I liked that chapter. The sex scene may not have turned out the way YOU wanted it to, but it still was pretty good I thought. Update again soon, I really like this story. I can't wait til the others realize what Naruto and Shika were doing! ^_^
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 17:47 EDT
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WooHoo that was H O T... Shika and Naruto make a great couple!!! Is Shika Naruto's mate I mean the biting and all??? Well nice chap..can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: Gacktluvr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 16:50 EDT
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YAy, Shika finally got some! ><
I love Naruto and Shika together! ^^ Great story, I hope you update soon! :)
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Title: WOWSA!!
Reviewed By: rayangel911 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 19:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that was soooooooooooooooooooo goood well just wanted to say that was one of the best stories i've ever read!! so KEEP IT UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 22:10 EDT
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I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! THIS IS GREAT! Good job with them. This is gonna be really good!
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