| "Little Sister" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Little Sister
Reviewed By: Anna (sesshoumarus_gurl005@hotmail.com) On: February 22, 2007 09:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Heyy. I like ur story. But can u plz write, uh, clearly? Use enter instead of shift n enter. But don't worry! Ur story is still good! Honest! Just write clearer, please? Uh, ur writing through chapter 1 to 3 is kind of hard 2 read when they're all jammed 2gether. But I still lyke it! Along wit ur other readers, visitors n reviewers! Update a.s.a.p!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2007 02:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep it up!!!!!*S*
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Reviewed By: Vandreador [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2007 06:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
update soon
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 03:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Purefire16 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 21:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
0.0 ........... Love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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