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Title: Too Bad
Reviewed By: Atomika07 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2012 23:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is really to bad that you never finished this, for some reason I never stumbled upon this wonderful fanfic until now and I am sooooo sad you didn't finish... anyway to persuade you to finish, even after so long. Ugh this is so great. Your originalitly is a 10, your style of writing is a 10 and its hard to find Inuyasha fanfiction like this.... Anyway, I absolutely love this :) |
Reviewed By: GinaBristow [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2008 20:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok Roshully for the record I currently have 2 chapters left of this story and I am completely dreading reading them because then... well it's over. I won't have anything good to read till it takes your fancy again. This review isn't meant to be a clap clap write more type of thing but to explain to you that while I fully LOVED the God's opinion I am so in love(like expensive chocolate and flowers on Valentines Day type love)with this story now. I do kind of wish that I had read this before I found TGO, I might be satisfied but alas I did not. But to be serious you are one of the best writers that I have come across. You are extremely descriptive and engaging. Your plot is fresh and exciting. The way you keep your characters in character while removing them from their natural element is simply genius. I admire your research into your stories which makes them more than just words on paper.I don't know if I can be more effusive(well I could but it would just be embarrassing for the both of us) I was compelled to let you know how much I enjoy and appreciate your work.
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Reviewed By: Jessie Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 15:01 EST
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OMG! This is such a good story. You must continue on with it. Now that the 'Gods Opinion' is complete, you can finish this one... Pl-pl-pleaaaaaaaaase! Anyway, I really love how you have built the story, there are so many questions that I MUST HAVE ANSWERS TO! Anyway, I hope you continue with it.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 01:39 EDT
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interesting story... like it so far... update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2007 14:17 EDT
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good stuff can't wait for the next installment.
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Reviewed By: Kandy1855 On: June 08, 2007 10:24 EDT
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Oh...thank you, thank you,thank you for updating! Good chapter... wonder who has her bag? Sesshomaru? Naraku? Hmmmmm....
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 22:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WooHoo... get bored some more! Lol... Like this and absolutely love TGO, but I know how RL can bite sometimes, so update when ya can! ;)
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Title: malitiadixie
Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 20:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm... wonder who it could be. Pretty cool chappie. I still wonder where all that info went. But that's okay. Keep your little secrets.
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Title: malitiadixie
Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 15:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very cool! I am a little obsessed with AU right now. I have never read a post-apo story before. I might have to read them more often now. I am really into this story. It is very original. I wonder when Kag with realize who Inu is? The suspense is terrible! But it's worth it. Can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: Kandygrl On: May 22, 2007 11:07 EDT
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I think I can handle that... great chapter as always!
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Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 03:44 EDT
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Hmm.. so I wonder how this info is bound to her..? I am not sure where you are going with all of this. Good job! :o) I enjoyed reading it!
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 13:14 EDT
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Are you going to explain how the information was bound to her body? Is it like a tattoo or something?
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 19:04 EDT
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meh, i still think both stories are great. Maybe when you finish Gods' Opinion, you could then finish this? I liked the background on Naraku, it was boring without excitement, but vital to the understanding of the story. I'd type more but i have a conference call coming up. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2007 02:34 EDT
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What can I say? This chapter was fabulous! It was amazing. Great job the descriptions, on the characters, on tessaiga.. everything. The relationships between the characters are done very well. It is a perfect set up for what is to come. I think it is strung together perfectly :o) I hope that your job gets better... work sucks, I know. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 00:26 EDT
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*sobs broken heartedly* i dont know which story i want you to update more, this incredible one or Gods' Opinion. Damn. I can't wait to see what happens next, so i heartly encourage you to update whenever you get a chance. Good luck on the new job. :)
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Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 05:13 EDT
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Oh yes! They finally met... It wasn't as big of a deal as I thought... but I think it was appropriate. I just am wondering what's going to happen next... I can't wait for another update! Good Job :o)
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe (nsi) On: April 12, 2007 11:56 EDT
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Ok I started reading your other story and loved the style of writing but was curious as to other stories you had. So I found this and couldn't stop until I was done reading it. I LOVE IT! As soon as I can login again I will be adding you as a favorite author I don't want to miss any updates. I will now be going back to read your other story about Kagome wanting to have a baby. Are you a Kag/Inu shipper?
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 05:08 EDT
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wow kagome is a good liar and also badass. what's gonna happen next? dun dun dun
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Reviewed By: Kandygrl On: April 05, 2007 00:25 EDT
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I love this fic... it's one of my favorites. I do have one question... Was it Kagome or Kikyo that Inuyasha raped?
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Reviewed By: asterick On: April 03, 2007 22:21 EDT
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This is a really excellent story: the plot is intelligently done, and the characters are great! Hope you keep writing.
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Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 19:24 EDT
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Hmm.. no scent huh? That's very suspicious... And Kikyo's crazy... yeesh. Yay for the meeting!! :o) I want to read it so much! I can't wait!!!!! I am adding you my fave authors :o) I really enjoy reading this story. Thanks so much for updating on a regular basis! It always puts me in a good mood to read your stories!
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Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 03:50 EDT
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hmm... there is definitely more to this than what everyone knows... i am happy for the update :o) i really am anxious for kagome and inuyasha to meet! hmm.. what is kagome doing in her appartment? something big has to happen soon... i can feel it! great job! i can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Maloy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2007 17:54 EDT
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Hmm.. Nice) it caught my attention. I'm looking forward for you to update)
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Reviewed By: elemental66 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 10:41 EDT
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ok 2 b truthful this story has a lot of boring spots and usaly i would just stop reading but 4 some reason i have a really good feeling that if i keep reading it will become one of my favoret stories ever so thank you for updating. i thought that instead of u thanking every one who reviewed i would thank you 4 updating
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Title: cactusflower
Reviewed By: Cactusflower [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 04:37 EDT
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I find the way that you are writing the story different and interesting. Even though it is different from what I usually read, I am finding it to be something that I am enjoying. Keep it going and update when you can.
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Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 02:34 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh! Thank you for your response :o) That made my day!! I am sure it won't be a slip up.. it will be needed. I am curious to see if you will put Inuyasha and Kikyo together for awhile... and what will happen when Inuyasha and Kagome meet.. I can't wait to read more!! This is a fantastic story!
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Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 02:38 EDT
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Good Job :o) I like how this chapter turned out.. I like knowing the background info. :o) I can't wait to see what happens when everythings starts to get going! Keep up the great work!!!
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Reviewed By: Princess Tiger Lilly [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2007 02:42 EDT
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Nice development! Looking forward to more!
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Reviewed By: Emi_Bombs_Badfic [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2007 13:31 EST
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Eeeeeeeegh, I like! Original! Yes! I like your protrayal of the Kikyou-Inuyasha relationship. Can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 02:31 EST
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Good Job :o) I was happy for the update! I want to see what happens next.. and when will Kagome and Inuyasha meet?
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