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Reviewed By: lara5170 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2016 19:40 PDT Comment/Review:
I have enjoyed reading this but I'm curious I noticed you didn't
use Sessh as an option for Kagome to be with in this. Since he's a
dog demon too and in this story could she end up with him or is it
only Naruto characters for her?
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Reviewed By: Valinor's Twilight [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2008 09:04 PST Comment/Review: awesome update, I loved it, though it was kind of sad. Keep writing.
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Reviewed By: Princess of dobermans [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2008 19:33 PDT Comment/Review: please update soon it has been awhile and its a really good story please please please update
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Reviewed By: FxB [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2007 12:29 PDT Comment/Review: i say update(a.k.a. good story i really like it so update soon)
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Title: The War of Survival: Weapons ( Chapter 8 ) Reviewed By: queenkikyo_kinginuyasha15 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2007 15:17 PDT Comment/Review: i say neij and kags should set to get there
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2007 16:57 PDT Comment/Review: Dang the chapters over......Every time I read I get sad ...... Naruto is too koo to die dang it.........*I feal so dang depressed right now and this just reminds me of the horrible way Naruto died*......Do you think that they could send Kagome back to where she was befor she was taken away I'm mean if she is the same age wouldn't it have been more effective if she lived out her life and got more expirence.....this just Isn't fun...*pouting to self*...........please update soon..........Nyuka
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Title: finish please Reviewed By: bookworm182 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2007 18:44 PDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: please continue, i really love it when Kagomes all strong and powerful and in control.
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Reviewed By: mangekyouperv [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2007 14:13 PDT Comment/Review: cant belive narutos dead at least he died with honor for his village
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2007 22:34 PDT Comment/Review: NNNNNnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo..........................Why did you do that ....I was already in pain at the fact that he died why did you have to turn him in to a puppet....Whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy.....*sob softly to self* I feel my heart is in the a deep sarrow of pain, I didn't want him to die and now you bring him back as a puppet like Kuhaku....I don't like it, I realy don't.....................(ok focasing my mind) ......I just started reading you fic and it is a very nice one if I do say so my self I just wish that Naruto didn't die....that is so sad and now hes a puppet and even if he snapped out of puppet mode Kagome would have to kill him to get the fragment....its not fair....she was in enough pain as it was and I can feel that pain .....I truly feel that I can.....I hope thing will work out for the better............Nyuka *cry soft tears of pain*
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Reviewed By: i wear black deal with it [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2007 02:09 PDT Comment/Review: i vote for kagome/neji
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Reviewed By: Lady Niona [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 19:20 PDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: this is one awsome fanfic :) please update sooN!!!
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Reviewed By: yer lil demon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2007 12:47 PDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: ....i know!TT_TT can;t naruto really be alive just hidding out reganing his strangth?!?!?! TT_TT please?!?!?!
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Reviewed By: yer lil demon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2007 11:16 PDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: kagome/neji or kagome/sasuke ^_^ i love this story so far!
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 02:23 PDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hey it's me! I loved your story so far and i have read all of your fanfics !Keep writing please!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Valinor's Twilight [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2007 09:11 PDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: kagome told sasuke good.
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