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Title: finish please Reviewed By: bookworm182 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2007 18:44 PDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: please continue, i really love it when Kagomes all strong and powerful and in control.
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Reviewed By: mangekyouperv [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2007 14:13 PDT Comment/Review: cant belive narutos dead at least he died with honor for his village
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2007 22:34 PDT Comment/Review: NNNNNnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo..........................Why did you do that ....I was already in pain at the fact that he died why did you have to turn him in to a puppet....Whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy.....*sob softly to self* I feel my heart is in the a deep sarrow of pain, I didn't want him to die and now you bring him back as a puppet like Kuhaku....I don't like it, I realy don't.....................(ok focasing my mind) ......I just started reading you fic and it is a very nice one if I do say so my self I just wish that Naruto didn't die....that is so sad and now hes a puppet and even if he snapped out of puppet mode Kagome would have to kill him to get the fragment....its not fair....she was in enough pain as it was and I can feel that pain .....I truly feel that I can.....I hope thing will work out for the better............Nyuka *cry soft tears of pain*
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Reviewed By: i wear black deal with it [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2007 02:09 PDT Comment/Review: i vote for kagome/neji
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Reviewed By: Lady Niona [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 19:20 PDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: this is one awsome fanfic :) please update sooN!!!
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Reviewed By: yer lil demon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2007 12:47 PDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: ....i know!TT_TT can;t naruto really be alive just hidding out reganing his strangth?!?!?! TT_TT please?!?!?!
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Reviewed By: yer lil demon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2007 11:16 PDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: kagome/neji or kagome/sasuke ^_^ i love this story so far!
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 02:23 PDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hey it's me! I loved your story so far and i have read all of your fanfics !Keep writing please!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Valinor's Twilight [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2007 09:11 PDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: kagome told sasuke good.
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Reviewed By: Valinor's Twilight [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2007 09:20 PDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: yay, update.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 23:51 PDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: BAWWWWWW Koga is back!!! YAY lol i love it ^^
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Reviewed By: Valinor's Twilight [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 10:40 PDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Koga!
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Reviewed By: Valinor's Twilight [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 11:15 PDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: great update.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 01:52 PDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: sorry i havent been here for awhile >.< but awww i WANT TO THE PAIRINGS!!!! its killing me T-T wheres sesshy!?! *shifty eyes* hmmm anyways still great!! update when ya can!!
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Reviewed By: Angelwings21 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2007 19:56 PDT Comment/Review: I loved it ^^ Please make it a Sasuke/Kagome Pairing. It was such a hot Lemon >.< So please tell us what are the Pairings when not Sasuke/Kagome? And please update soon.
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