| "Kagome Smells" Reviews/Comments [ 456 ] |
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Reviewed By: I_am_madmiko_nsi On: April 01, 2007 21:57 CDT
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Awesome! I had to stop reading twice to wipe the tears from my eyes because I was laughing so hard! Leave it to you to come up with a killer surprise like that. I was NOT expecting Naraku to appear as Miroku. That was incredible. And the way he accused Inuyasha of "going back to Kagome," well, that was just inspired. then there was the whole problem with Little Tetsusaiga being stuck because it wouldn't "untransform" -- genius! What an interesting discovery Kagome made about being able to harness and control her power as they ... heh heh! Loved the visual she had of their auras. Glad she insisted he go ahead and bite her -- she wasn't going to be an unmated mother, after all. Good for her!! Poor Inu was so clueless through the whole thing. Loved the way Miroku reported to Sango that Kagome had just "picked up where she left off" -- even with the Miroku imposter standing right there. Ha!! Got to give her full points for balls there -- then again, she HAD already staked out Inuyasha and started taking advantage of him, so no big deal, right? Heh heh! And, ew! Can't believe what Naraku decided to do there, and I don't blame Miroku for being unnerved enough by the sight/thought to jump up and yell, "That's not me!" Nice of Sango to save him by grabbing his, um, ... you know, and pulling him back down. Can't believe he decided to just go ahead and indulge in sneaking up behind Sango while Naraku was standing there watching Inu's ass waving in the air. LOL!! And then we come to ... the incident. What in the world possessed Kagome to send her powers out Inu's ... ROFL!! She couldn't just sling it over his shoulder at Naraku? Sorry. I had to pause in my typing to wipe my eyes again. And i think you just coined a new classic line: "Everybody blames the hanyou." This chapter was sheer, unadulterated genius. I most humbly beg you to keep going. This is so good, I'd hate to see it end. Sorry to hear you had some flamer annoyance. Just remember: one unenlightened ignoramus out of thousands of dedicated, adoring fans is nothing. I'm confident the masses will agree with me when I say your efforts are sincerely appreciated and enormously enjoyed. Thanks for sharing your talent and humor with us!!
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Reviewed By: @nG3L On: April 01, 2007 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg why would u stop?! i love this fanfic! please continue!
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Reviewed By: lunatickat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 21:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd love to see five or six more chapters. I'm sorry to hear you got flamed. I've been a bit of a skulker (reading but not reviewing. Bad luna!) but I've really loved your story. It has never failed to bring a smile to my face and even the occasional sprint to the bathroom so I don't pee my pants from laughing so hard. I mean really, where else can you find a story that has Naraku being temporarily defeated by a blast of pure energy coming out of Inu's ass. That was insane. And I loved it. Great work!
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Reviewed By: doggieearlover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 21:44 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, if it makes you feel any better, you're on the ballot for Humorous Fiction at the Feudal Association, and you've already been nominated in the first round for Best Comedy at the IYFG, and those just started today (and it wasn't me because I wasn't fast enough). You should write whatever makes you happy, and if you want to go a few more chapters to round it out, then do so. I know mine usually go on longer than I originally intended, but it's the only way to get everything in that I wanted to. I find the story humourous and creative, so just ignore the idiot who's probably never even attempted to write a thing and left flames. He probably isn't intelligent enough to comprehend what you wrote, anyway. I know they hurt (I've had my fair share), but I'd say those that enjoy your work far outweigh one neanderthal idiot.
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Reviewed By: Neomeneomine On: April 01, 2007 21:26 CDT
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Snigger snigger. . . Chapters!!!!!!!!!! Wh00t!!
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Reviewed By: bblackdahlia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 20:49 CDT
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This is one of the funniest stories that I've read in a long time. The element of comedy is there yet it's not overshadowing the plot. Keep up the great work!
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Title: Nekomew78, wanna be friends?
Reviewed By: Shinn-sama On: March 29, 2007 15:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I'm very happy you have forgiven me...I just read the comments my cousin left in my name again...I can't believe someone could be so cruel!! The fic rocks!! And I've told all my friends about it they love it too! Nekomew78, I was wondering if you wanted to be my friend...cuz of what my cousin did, everyone has practicly flamed the hell out of my fic on fanfiction.net to make me "see what it's like". I can't explain how I felt when they took it off...my first fic ever...now I have to start over! So, please be my friend? P.S: Keep writing! I love it! And of course I was a bit disappointed when Inuyasha and Kagome were interupted when they were soooo close!!!!!! UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: _Kiki_ On: March 28, 2007 20:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LMFAO I LOVED THIS CHAPTER! PLZ UPDATE REALLY SOON
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Title: To the inu reviewer.
Reviewed By: Nekomew78 On: March 28, 2007 14:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In your face most annoying one. This story is awsome!!!!!! To the author. As always, keep it up!!! I want to see what happens to inuyasha and 'meroku' and Kagome's reaction. Please update as soon as possible!!!!
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Title: hey!!!
Reviewed By: Fansome gurl On: March 28, 2007 10:08 CDT
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What's going on? The story is so different I can't believe how much I missed! My internet was shut off for a long time and I couldn't read what happend next...but whoa! Lesbian, gay, pregnant, and now Kagome and Inuyasha are being intimate...I need to sit down, this is crazy...but highly intertaining! Keep it up!
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Title: You rock
Reviewed By: shinn-sama On: March 27, 2007 12:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best fic I've read in a lomg time and I want you to update A.S.A.P ok? And for you Ashley aka my loser cousin, you deserve to be punished! You're five years older than me so act your age and learn proper grammer!! Shinn-sama out!
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Title: you traitor
Reviewed By: the_inu_reviewer On: March 27, 2007 11:41 CDT
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how dare you rat me out shinn-sama aka cassy you bitch I'm very disappointed with you.
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Reviewed By: nime_bby [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 22:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
IT WAS PERFECT BUT I DON'T GET THE LAST FEW SENTENCES
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Reviewed By: Inu_inu_luvluv [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 11:05 CDT
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That was a really good chapter! (your grammar really isn't the best, but the story covers it ^.^') !!!! i love this story! LOL LOL LOL and i couldn't help laughing! more!!
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Reviewed By: Annomus On: March 25, 2007 23:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! you soo have to have Naraku tell Kikyo about all this ad stuff... this is a really good story!! we have to keep in contact if you have msn add me littleblue1990@hotmail.com or dark_babe_1990@hotmail.com
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