| "Kagome Smells" Reviews/Comments [ 456 ] |
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Title: Thanks for the laugh!
Reviewed By: Licentia poetica [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2007 10:04 CST
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Coffee and a good laugh...what a great way to wake up! The image of Inuyasha and Kaede, though...eww. Thanks for the morning pickup!
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Reviewed By: animegamergirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2007 00:33 CST
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Poor Inuyasha...I would really hate to be in his situation and with Kaede...ewwwwwwwwwwww!!!! This was a good chapter and I can't wait for more^_^
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Reviewed By: Knight31 On: February 11, 2007 23:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a really good fic i loved it please write more. =)
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Reviewed By: inuearlover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 21:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
write as soon as@possible it was great
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Reviewed By: Nick F. On: February 11, 2007 21:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep up the good work! I really want to know how far Inuyasha would go to stay...unexcited. And the face sitting in the well? Hope to see that scene sans clothing once the two come to understanding. Love the Kaede's comment at the end.
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Reviewed By: Leanne5582(not signed in) On: February 11, 2007 18:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOSH! THAT IS F*&^ING HILARIOUS! whew! please continue it! "tops of creamy white globes" and "triangle of lacy fabric" that's GREAT! HAHAHAHAHAHA ok I'm better now. Oh! and the impotent thing! AWESOME! LOL. ("motion in the ocean" - your 'miko's instincts') ok i'm weird. Please continue this fic :-D
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 13:28 CST
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Well there's no denying that the chapter was funny. But I'm starting to see the story wander off into OOC land. I can't see Mama letting Kagome buy those clothes if she were so concerned to begin with. Not only that but I can't imagine Kagome taking this such extremes to the point of showing her body just to see if Inuyasha gets aroused. It's not the brightest idea since she has smelled him get aroused before and that would obviously have no bearing on the potency of his sperm. Maybe Kagome would ask Myouga or someone about hanyou reproducing but this is all in my opinion. Kagome's behavior is probably just a plot device.
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Reviewed By: geriluvsinu On: February 10, 2007 11:08 CST
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damn that was funny. I'm still wiping the tearsa from my eyes.
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Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2007 08:34 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahaha, NO WONDER Inuyasha blanked out and then fainted! He is after all 200 years old (according to the third movie at least, although he's spent only 150 of those awake) and he SHOULD have some pent up sexual frustration going on. But it's still hilarous!!!! And Kagome doesn't even get it! Now she's using her sense of smell too much and neglects to use her brain, how typical of her! Impressive how you manage to keep 'em IC in a story like this! And the WacDonald's scene...that one's gonna be a classic, I tell you! Praise to you!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2007 22:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now that would be an interesting sight to behold for the Hanyou, lol. Could just picture that in my mind. Things are getting very interesting as well as a little heated up, lol. I like this. Update when ya can!! :)
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Reviewed By: firebird234 On: February 09, 2007 21:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahahahaha I love this story it is so funny, I can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Future Author On: February 09, 2007 21:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHAHAHAH!!! That last chapter was just too funny. I love this story. I can't wait to find out what happens next. So update soon and keep up the good writing.
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Reviewed By: Nick F. On: February 09, 2007 19:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your stories...I have always liked your stories...but this chapter just take the top prize! I was laughing so hard at the scene at Wacdonald and was just gaping at the computer in astonishment as I read the Kagome's crotch landing on Inuyasha's face scene. How do you come up with these unbelievable stuff?! Anyway, love love love it and really can't wait for the next chapter! Oh, and would you write another Valentine fic this year? I love Inuyasha's Valentine Confusion..so write another one? Pretty please?
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2007 17:58 CST
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Really enjoyed the scene in WacDnlds!
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Reviewed By: animegamergirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2007 16:42 CST
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This sooooooo made my day!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!! Update again soon^______^
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