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| "Turning the Tables" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: bluezinthos [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2007 09:17 CST
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i too am a big fan of demon!inu and there can definetly be more of him. i'm curious to see how kikyou will react to inuyasha in his most instinctive form and whether or not he will immediatly consider her a threat or an ally. i guess it would all depend on her approach. you have a way with style and weaving together details. you have another minion to add to you tally!
| Reviewed By: werxa [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2007 08:53 CST
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uh oh cliffy, update next chapter soon
| Reviewed By: Eartha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2007 07:33 CST
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Very good first chapter. Whether it's cliche or not, I can't tell until you write more chapters (hint, hint). But, even if it is, at least you seem to write very well, so it can be the best cliche story out there, ne? Please continue, I think this story will be very enjoyable to read.
| Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2007 06:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've got me hooked!! and no worries.. Kikyou has never seen Inuyasha either as human or full demon. You have approached this 'cliche'(my opnion.. not enough of it...) subject with a refreshing look and feel that I only acredit to my favs of favs!! Love that Kagome was wounded by the evil scorpion. You have kept Inuyasha in what I feel is an excellent characterization! I think I'm becoming a big fan of yours!! You have the others excellently done as well!! Swoons happily!! This is Awesome!!! I eagerly await the next chapter! You Rock!!
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