| "Transforming desire" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 18:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
interesting story... really enjoyed reading it... great work... good job...
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 16:10 CDT
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Nooooooo! You can't leave it like that! Get back here and finish this, darn it all. Aaaackkkkkk, I hate unfinished work! You can't post it and not complete it, no fair. Please, please, come back. Please?
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Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 13:26 CDT
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Wow! I like how hard it is to tell where he transformed back. Hints of it here and there, but no difinitive point. I guess it's when he actually starts thinking about wanting permission, and not just - Mine Mine Mine!! Good job
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: InuKags_little_mutt [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 12:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
goodie goodie goodie GOODIE! That was great! Woo!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 11:30 CDT
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Mmmmmm.........hot. Very, very hot. Love this, the intensity, the rush. Very nicely done.
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Reviewed By: axel720 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 08:19 CDT
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Nice. I thought I'd have a look at your stuff now that I've found the time, and I have to say I'm impressed! =D It's nice to read someone else's InuYasha's POV =) Your style fits him; the simple, basic thoughts I'd imagine he would use as a full youkai in that situation. I like Kagome too, how you left her thoughts a mystery, and that she needed him to know that it was her (that's what I would have done XD!). Thanks for the good read. I'll make sure to read more of your work!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2007 07:15 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yea like Autumn_the_Reviewer said... i didnt know he change back either ^.^ but i like it ^^ not much lemon but there was enough lemon..... thats why i like it ^^ all the others go into REAL details.... its like 'ooo oki...' lol ^^
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2007 23:43 CDT
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ack,i love the possessiveness of Inuyasha.. damn do i love it. But if you wanted to let us readers know that he reverted back to his hanyou self, you should have told us in the story. lol i didnt realize it, until i read your ending author note. :)
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Title: Great Job
Reviewed By: copycatter [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 08:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very Good!!!! Love the one shot!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: InuHanyouRaeRae [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 07:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow!! This story was fucking amazing. I LOVED it and have read it several times. FUCFKING AWESOME!!! PLZ WRITE MORE!!
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Title: oh, that sly one
Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2007 00:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
such a dog, yet he submits to his willing bitch. fitting
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2007 18:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nicely done! I look forward to reading more from you.~ B reading U!
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