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"SF: Angel In Disguise" Reviews/Comments [ 1 ]
 Reviewed By: LadyLark [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 09, 2004 21:43 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is not bad and I feel bad that you don't have any other reviews since this is a decent songfic. You have a few grammar issues. Mostly with commas in relation to actions around speech. I am not familiar with Sailor Moon so I can't evaluate that aspect. But keep working, you have the potential to be a very good writer since you have a good hand for description and good dramatic flair.

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