| "Weird?..or Fate?" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Romanitza On: September 16, 2010 02:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I simply don't understand how anyone could give a story like this 10 out of 10. Grammar, spelling, punctuation? Where are they? I can't see them anywhere. Oh, and don't get me started on the lack of descriptions. How you handle the unveiling of how Tala and Amy were actually related and why they were separated was done so poorly, so pathetically that there is nothing else to say but this story is nothing short of terrible! Sorry to be mean, but it's like you spent all of five minutes on it. It seems more like a brief outline than anything else, scribble to be blunt. It could have easily been dragged out into several chapters of angst and soul searching was slaughtered down to a half a fucking paragraph! The standards on this site is too low...
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: Kaikouji On: December 03, 2008 10:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it. keep updating. and update soon please!
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Title: party! fighting party!
Reviewed By: LadyAmazon14 On: July 06, 2007 14:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a long wait and i was mad that you took so long but that chapter made up for your absense. i can relate to the main character. my friend throw me in the pool all the time. but if it was kai, tala or ray i wouldn't complain. anyway awesome job, keep it going.
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Title: coolio
Reviewed By: horsesrocketh [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 16:41 CST
Comment/Review:
awesome story! i like it! WOO! and...that comment...whoa..so violent. lol. CONTINUE!
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Reviewed By: king of hell [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2007 21:57 CST
Comment/Review:
hello u bastard. id like to take this moment to say...................................................ADD KENY A.K.A CHIEF. if my demands are not met i will hunt you down trow out a 12 houses window then take a chansaw to your leg. then slow cut off your are and roll your nub in salt and lemon juice.which trust me is really really pain your fan Darius XD
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Reviewed By: Isabell [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2007 16:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like this story and will be waiting for u to update. It is really good and I like the plot
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