| "The Devil in Miss Tendo" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: shadowalker666 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2009 03:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting and quite different. It has been a while but i hope you update it again soon.
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Title: we want more
Reviewed By: the walker [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 11:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
if there was a higher rating than ten then this fic would get a 10,000 for every thing it was briliant will the be more. I hope so.
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Reviewed By: Cardinel On: May 12, 2007 12:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a beautiful piece of work. I'd love to see it continued. This story has a future I never saw before in other ranma fan works, and i hope that it will reach it. good luck to you. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: DrewB1442 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 02:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
Not a bad idea, and I would like to see more of it.
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Reviewed By: Gundraw [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 23:12 CDT
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I was pleasantly surprised, most lemons just leap into the stuff with little semblance of plot. Of course there's a lot of OOCness, but it's not overdone to the point of complete unbelievability. I'd like to see it continued if possible, the idea of the fiancees somewhat getting along all in a pursuit of our pig-tailed protagonist is fun. Hope to see it continued.
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Reviewed By: random guy On: May 03, 2007 16:41 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hahaha, lol I love it. Reading this just made my day, I started cracking up in my chair... lol please keep this one going
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Reviewed By: rami the great On: April 19, 2007 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very fresh and fun to read. one of my favorites keep up the good work and get another chapter asap ok.
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Reviewed By: TaiKhan On: April 16, 2007 06:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Enjoying the story, but there are detractors. I know you stated that the characters would be OOC, but you've utterly rewritten Akane's character: no temper and self-admittedly 'in love' with Ranma (not even Takahashi 'stated' Ranma and Akane loved each other, only that they were the only 'real' couple in the series). In short, you're trying too hard to make ALL of the girls 'accepting' of the change in their relationship with Ranma and the other girls. As it is, you might as well just have a massive orgy in the morning and get it out of the way. I, for one, don't really consider this 'lemon' yet, merely heavy lime. And while there's a great deal of teasing innuendo...there's virtually no substance and likely not going to be for quite some time, as you've set the stipulation that 'three' of the girls have to agree to have sex with Ranma before any of them actually get around to doing so. Any other hurdles going to show up?
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Reviewed By: Lonewolbro On: April 15, 2007 02:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great work man keep it up looking forward to future chapters. Love the writing style and it is a Good concept. Also like the way you have Akane react seems realistic and in tone with her character. P.S. About time you got some lemon in there but the build up to it definetly made it better =)
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Reviewed By: Scyggy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 14:11 CDT
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Just stuck this on my list and re-read it, for the purpose of continuity, since you keep putting parts up out of order on TFF. Hawt parts, but it was getting confusing. Awesome as always Avis.
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Reviewed By: 117 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 06:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is interesting with the Ranma-Kasumi-Nabiki connection. I guess there is nothing more *irresistable* than Kasumi giving Ranma pointers in sex and making out with him or his female form. I find that part where a very seductive and innocent Kasumi (how does she become both at the same time? I swear it's impossible but somehow Kasumi plays both roles admirably^_^) and Ranma going at it *irresistable* with her innocent cries of 'Oh My' when getting off an orgasm or something. Last words ... please continue this fic! Don't leave us ... the poor readers hanging ... and drooling with anticipation ...
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Reviewed By: FireIvory [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 00:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, can't wait for the next chapters.
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Reviewed By: dennisud [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 19:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the best thought out and entertaining Ranma lemon sagas I have read in a long time. I hope you update this soon and i truly hope Akane can get over her hesitation cause I can see she'll flip over when she has her turn with Ranma. Either this will be a Wife/Haram story or one hell of a great sex saga! dennisud
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Title: Great stuff
Reviewed By: kalaong [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 11:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Ranma's first time is going to be (at least) a threesome? Lucky, LUCKY baka-san. Kasumi and Nabiki seem up to it, but I doubt the third Tendo sister is. Akane is my favorite fiance, simply becuase of the way they interact when Ranma doesn't eat his foot and she doesn't have a tantrum. Alas, she'll have to go later. However, I think if Ukyo and Shampoo were asked they'd jump at it-at the same time! P.S. It's really hard to get Kasumi to seem 'in character' for a lemon, but you pulled it off with pizazz!
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