| "Shattered Freedom" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2008 00:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hmmm, interesting. COntinue to update, and do so again by the end of the month, maybe? It'd be appreciated. Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2008 00:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
Neat, UPDATE! Love the story as usual, and the possibility of training from gravity rooms and saijins? AWESOME! COntinue to update, and do so soon, please? That would ROCK! Update again soon, ja ne.
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Reviewed By: kit-kit12 On: May 09, 2007 15:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love your chapter as always
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Reviewed By: kit-kit12 On: April 20, 2007 14:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it
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Reviewed By: kit-kit12 On: April 18, 2007 14:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
me love it..i feel a heart to heart is coming
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Reviewed By: kit-kit12 On: April 14, 2007 23:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love this chapter it was very funny
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Reviewed By: kit-kit12 On: April 13, 2007 14:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow me like this chapter..im glad yusuke is excepting a little bit of pleasure
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Reviewed By: kit-kit12 On: February 07, 2007 10:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow another amazing chapter, and i think its about time hiei noticed that yusuke ia a "big boy" now.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2007 00:46 CST
Comment/Review:
Jeeze, I thought I reviewed this one. Whatever. Love this story, and I'd like to see a happy ending (but like that ever happens, right? it's a matter really of finding th best place to stop) Anyway, hate the torture of Yusuke and Hiei (damn they're both hot!)anyway, I look forward to more chapters, please update often and long, kk?
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Reviewed By: kit-kit12 On: January 30, 2007 15:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow me love this story im so glad that you are continuing it.
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