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| "Military Branch" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] | Reviewed By: Manga Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 06:12 CDT
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T-T Sooo short! But funny! Update again soon!
| Reviewed By: Manga Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 05:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, sorry for taking so long to review. School is hellacious, absolute murder. Update soon, I like what you've got going here!
| Title: ._.
Reviewed By: xXx_Wings_of_a_demon_xXx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 20:40 CDT
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._. *looks dead* oh... The breakline that I put there dissapeared! Oh, well, there was SUPPOSED >.< To be abreakline in bteween the 'Al laughing hysterically', and the 'Al asking about the ring.'So... Yeah. I feel dumb ._. About my rant at the end, It was just because I felt pissed off...at someone...who just so happened to be RESTARTING her fanfiction... *cough* Anyways, I don't think That I'v been doing my best on this >.< I don't like it, even if I'V writen it. But, anyways, I'm ranting too! XDXDXD okay, okay, I'll get back to writing now. Anyone have any thing to say... well, Either review or E-mail me. I don't care.
| Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 20:26 CDT
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I feel hurt, I do post a review for all of the chapters, that is once I found your story. But I know that most people don't review, I don't get it, I mean you can let other people know if a story sucks by reviewing, you can give the author advise if the author sucks, you can give input or just say that a story is great, in the middle or completely sucks. Sorry, I'm ranting... I do have to say that you might want to work on making the action flow a bit more and maybe some sort of breakline between scenes (or I am dense and missed the breakline). Good job though, I liked the embarrassment and the little thoughts that we got to see, I also like how dense you've made Ed and Al since they are portrayed as so smart in every other fanfic. Keep it up =)
| Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 23:48 CST
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Ok, so I'll only check about once a week to see if you've updated =) btw, I laughed so hard, and blushed, for a full five minutes after reading that you saw I had bookmarked you. I almost didn't get a chance to read the chapter and am now trying my best to not giggle. All that aside, this was a good chapter, at first I was wondering why Ed B!@#$ slapped Mustang, but I think I get what you were going for with Ed being the type of person to not like and hurt those who kill. update when you can, I'll try to survive in the mean time =)
| Title: Awsome story!!
Reviewed By: Britni Fullmetal Otaku [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2007 20:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is really good!!! I can't believe Roy killed her dad! I was like...WHAT?! Hehe well your story is great so far. You need to update! [Though I'm one to talk ^-^] Heh heh well...keep up the good work!!
| Reviewed By: hiya24 On: March 01, 2007 00:53 CST
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You are bookmarked. Keep up the good work.
| Title: O_o
Reviewed By: crazy_cutie67 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 19:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, Thats A Great Story So Far! x3 Update soon! *adds to favorites*
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