| "Breaking Point" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: S On: April 15, 2012 05:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing! Liked how you kept them IC throughout! |
Title: Simply Irresistible!
Reviewed By: Hellsing FanGirl On: August 12, 2008 16:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely captivating! The atmosphere was loaded with sexual tension and emotions ran high between them… right to the wonderful hot smoky sensual lemon! The characters stayed in character and dialogs between Alucard and Integra were witty and entertaining to read! I could actually imagine this happening, well as much as you can imaging anything sexual happening between A to I in this anime. I found your fic to be highly enjoyable, and I wont by exaggerating by saying it's one of the best I've read so far! Keep up the good work! I hope to see more of your fics in the Hellsing section!
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Reviewed By: LoverK On: December 29, 2007 00:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh wow!! I sooooo greatly enjoyed this fic! I could visualize every second of this. you have a great way of painting pictures with your words. keep it up, as I look forward to reading some more stories by you!!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2007 23:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
very, very well done. i think you hit it right on the head. the characters you've portrayed are so amazingly written, and so well rounded to keep them in character. your grammar was flawless and the story was very hot. who can't resist Alucard. the last few lines had me chuckling. "Bloody fucking vampires!" she cursed. "Give them an inch and they take a yard!" very well done!!!!
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