Reviewed By: darkmistress in the shadows On: April 09, 2007 18:41 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: loved it. All the chapters are great. Good job.
Reviewed By: darkmistress in the shadows On: April 09, 2007 11:31 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review: Aren't you going to write more? This was pretty cool. I liked your idea and how you portrayed both the characters. It was funny too. Good job.
