| "There Was A No-Eared, One-Horned WHAT?" Reviews/Comments [ 30 ] |
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Reviewed By: miko_hanyou_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2009 02:51 CDT
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oooohh.. i see now.. missed the author's note right there. haha:)
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Reviewed By: miko_hanyou_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2009 02:50 CDT
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great story! I especially loved the third lemon, it made me blush red like a tomato! hahaha i have to know, is this a continuation of your other fanfic "What to do with an Amnestic Hanyou"? I'm a big fan of your stories by the way... More power and keep up the good work!:)
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Reviewed By: gen50 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 04:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
3's company was extremely hot. always nice to see sess and inu together. kagome must be feeling good. 2 inus together! the miroku and sango part was pretty good too, and nicely explained. sango carries the prejudice of her times...
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Reviewed By: theIYobsessed On: June 23, 2007 00:41 CDT
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"He had been surprised to find that the miko was the mate and wife of the hanyou, and that the demon slayer was married to the man who was a Buddhist monk. " HAHA! I love that line. I knew all those things already--how strange they were--but something about the way you phrased it and put it in the viewpoint of a stranger really made it stand out. "the quivering angry man that was once Onigumo" 'the quivering angry man' I love that phrasing. And it gives you the perfect mental image too. Him standing there all weak and quivering, and furious... It's kinda funny actually... "Sesshomaru had shrugged his shoulders, looked at Rin, and actually sighed. The Taiyoukai really did not have to say anything; InuYasha knew that the boy would be safe with him. For some reason, his demon half brother almost seemed to feel responsible for Kohaku as he did for Rin." You have a really powerful way of summarizing things/recapping things. You do it succinctly, but entertainingly, and you give a mental picture without using a lot of description. Oh! Besides that. I liked that line 1) because Sesshomaru sighed 2) because of the reason he sighed. He seems doomed to take in little children. xDD And oh, dear. My poor innocent brain. *wails* Two youkai in one mutant body... "The problem was that it made the skunk so odiferous that even its own mate couldn't stand him" hahaha! But that parts funny. xD "Holy Buddha, help us," Miroku whispered. hahaha! And yes, paybacks are hell. This was great! I loved it! :D
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Title: ...Sexy
Reviewed By: keruri-chan On: June 17, 2007 23:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
...wow. This was... incredibly sexy. I have never actually been a fan of threesome or of any kind of yaoi, but this was hot. Okay... great writing, great story, a little OOC, but you had to have it that way for this to work, I guess... ...I need some alone time now...
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Reviewed By: BrokenAngel1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2007 00:24 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG!!!! i skipped the whole sango/miroku one cuz that really ain't my thing, but WOW!!! i'll be honest: at first, i was a little worried about the whole sesshomaru/inuyasha/kagome thing, but i have to admit that that one was HOTT!!!! i can't wait to see what other stories you have.
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Reviewed By: ran_undine [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 14:48 CDT
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wow, it was very good. very good smutness!! :) i'm gonna check out more of your writting
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2007 14:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god. that was amazing. truely amazing. you are an unbelievable writer one of the best ive read so far. keep up the great work adn continue this story PLEASE!
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Title: Yvonne
Reviewed By: 3's company On: April 14, 2007 15:00 CDT
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Wow that third lemon was hot, hot, hot! The best you've ever written. I don't even know why, maybe because there are variations to the reactions, like Inu actually was left aroused for a while, unlike your usual where Inu and Kag just seem to always be satisfied with whatever their partner did to them. To tell you the truth, I do like your one-shots because of the settings and characters, but your lemons've always been a bit...well, tame and boring. This lemon blows me away, however. Do hope to see more like this soon.
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Title: Wow.
Reviewed By: blithespirit [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 16:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That has got to be one the hottest things I've ever had the pleasure of reading. Keep fighting the good fight!
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Reviewed By: FlameTwirler [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 23:46 CDT
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Oh my goodness, that last line in Chapter three is killer funny ^_- haha
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Title: ohmigod!
Reviewed By: MrsJoey Wheeler [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 22:14 CDT
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I can't believe I haven't reviewed this one, considering I've read all of the one-shots! But, all of them were great and I really like the lemons. I love your style of writing lemons!
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Title: O_O
Reviewed By: SpookyKitty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 23:37 CDT
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OMG WOW!!! That was just umm WOW! You truely have a more perverted mind than me. I love this story alot. It was kick ass. and filled with lots of ass. but damn you made kagome do all that. She got filled like 5 times! But still DAMN!!!!! Best sex story ever!!!!
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Title: There Was A No-Eared, One-Horned WHAT?
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 13:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: LauraOR On: March 16, 2007 17:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you're always so good when you write. Even though I'm still waiting for a Rin and Sesshy lemon from aboutt he same line of story as this one or the one from Live and Let Die, all in all great job!
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