| "Naruto of the Uchiha Clan" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Teioke Sheay [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 16:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow, now i'm interested.. i look forward to the saga// hey, you got an account on Fanfiction.net? ~TS~ later..
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Reviewed By: kmt87 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 14:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very nice I can't wait to see your upcoming chapters
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Reviewed By: Angel of forgotten souls [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 23:47 CDT
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PLEASE hurry!
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Reviewed By: Teioke Sheay [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2007 15:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey...! Interesting fic you got goin' here maybe ill tune in to find out what happens next and just in case you did'nt know, that was a compliment - so don't get mad.
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Reviewed By: Alix-Nix545 On: February 16, 2007 07:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice, I've always liked the idea and your doing it well. Keep up the good work. :)
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Reviewed By: Lakota-Oracle On: February 04, 2007 12:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is an awesome story. I cant wait to read the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: !)ark Machine On: February 02, 2007 21:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say that this is one of the most entertaining fics I've read in a while. Well written and with a good concept that I've waited to see done well for some time. I like it very much so please continue to churn it out of that brain of yours. Perhaps we could mine it or something? I'm especially liking the way you put Itachi in this. His bipolarness is the most entertaining part. It's good to see Sasuke not moody and indifferent for once as well, very refreshing. I would like to see a good scene where Naruto finally gain's his new mother's trust. It could be a good source of drama and a very good scene if you can pull it off. I'll let you decide the context, just write more. However having said that, don't let pressure from reviewers such as myself rush you into putting out substandard work. Take your time and play with it how you see fit. I look forward to the next chapter.
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