| "Night Thoughts" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: DarkAngelJudas13 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2008 05:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KAWAII AND VERY SMEXY!!!!*smiles*
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Reviewed By: gen50-inlj [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 13:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was pretty good. you just need to explain why sess was suddenly able to cope... altho obviously it had something to do with having touga as their dad. bloodlines are the same.... and so inu is able to stand the poison? still, it would have been nicer if it was explicitly stated...
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Title: ohhkay
Reviewed By: Angel of Androgyny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 19:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
So I actually read the whole first chapter. Pretty good. But someone already has a fic on FF.net called 'Flesh of my Flesh' you may want to change your title it matches too well with the one on FF.net and that story was plagerised so if other people that have read her story and see the almost exact same title as hers thay'll think you tried to steal it. Just trying to save you from flamers. And ignore my other comment I'd delete it if I could.
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Title: eh...
Reviewed By: Angel of Androgyny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 18:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eh..I really hope only the title is plagarised. There's a fic already with that title on FF.net. Even if this is an original story I advise you to make up your own titles.
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