Reviewed By: Kanade [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2009 17:22 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Its a bit corny, but really sweet, makes me want to read more about the history that has passed here. ^__^ Ever thought about making the story longer? (Perhaps rewriting it?)
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