Reviewed By: hopelessly_demented On: June 05, 2008 14:08 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review: That was pretty good! I've always wondered whether Chichi ever got jealous over Gokou's closeness and friendship with Bulma and now you've put all those thoughts to paper in a very heart-wrenching way. Hmm, maybe you'll be interested in writing about Bulma's thoughts on Gokou? :)