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| "Unexpected Visitors" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: foxtale3 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2008 12:07 CST
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I loved this story! Your characterization of Kyou was amazing. Incredibly sweet. And your love scene came across as tender and passionate-- love making between a man and wife, rather than smut. Awesome job!
| Title: Great Story!
Reviewed By: MouF [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2007 19:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
After reading it, you're in my fav now! If all your future fics are as well writen, I'll be definitively waiting for an update / follow-up / new stories! I really laughted at Momiji's antics and the sexual tension **ouf! hawt, hawt, hawt!**. I would really like a follow-up of this story! I'm sure there would be a lot of teasing on the cousins part to the detriment of Kyou! And since you did nail Kyou's temperament, oohh the fire works!
| Title: Wonderful!!!
Reviewed By: meannaneko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2007 23:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! This was an amazing story to read. I felt drawn in, and captivated by it. The tension, the love and the heart jumped off the screen into my imagination. Your charactarizations were dead on. Thank you for a wonderful experience. I hope to read more!!! Let your imagination let you wonder, into more and share it with us!
| Title: Finally!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Sari-15 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 19:32 CST
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After six months of working...the rest of the world gets to see what I have known forever! Your characterization is dead on, I loved the scene where Yuki was ignoring Kyou which only angered him more. It was something I can see happening in my head. The conversation with Momiji had me laughing as well. He's being all caring and kind and almost has Kyou lulled into feeling guilty about yelling at their appearance...until he says something to anger the 'former' neko again. You did a great job with the sexual tension. I know how nervous it made you and how difficult it was to write. It turned out beautifully...and...of course I demand MORE!! Love you and GREAT JOB Heather!!!!!!
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