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| "The Girls" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Title: axel720
Reviewed By: axel720 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 23:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great, short, hot, sweet. I'll say it again, your style is the best! It's realistic, blunt, cute, funny, creative and very unique to your writing. Awesome work!
| Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2007 18:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!! They made up, and everything is all right again (for now, anyway). The boysex in the middle was very good, by the way. ^_^ As I was reading, though, I felt like I was starting to see the beginning of some possible yuri between Rukia and Orihime. I don't know if that's intended, but it kind of read that way. Another very good chapter of a series that I am really enjoying. Great job!
| Reviewed By: TruelyWickedRomance1319 On: February 07, 2007 20:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is awesome, if i wanted to explain how much i couldn't. Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please write more!!!! ;)
| Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2007 18:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I certainly don't hate you for pairing up Rukia and Ichigo or Ishida and Orihime. I ship Ichigo with Rukia, Renji, and Ishida, so I can live with that. **grins** I do hope Ichigo and Ishida can get back together, though. They work very well together, especially in this storyline, and I certainly hope they make it together (pun NOT intended). All that being said, this was a good chapter, seeing things from both sides as the boys try to adjust to this ...problem that has popped up. I am certainly looking forward to the final chapter.
| Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really am enjoying this series you've created with Ichigo and Uryuu. I was feeling a bit knocked for a loop when Ichigo and Rukia had sex, and that he actually told Uryuu about it, but he is still a teenager. I thought you did a great job with showing how Ichigo's infidelity is affecting both he and Uryuu. I am certainly waiting for the next chapter. And...why is everyone so worried about Orihime, anyway?
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