| "Equality Naruto" Reviews/Comments [ 62 ] |
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2007 03:19 CDT
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I am sorry to complain but COME ON AND UPDATE YOUR STORY it is going on a month since the last update so please update to me it seems like nobody wants to update there stories and that is what annoys the hell out of me why write a story when you plan not to update them often hell it is a really good story and I still am hopping it is a Naruto/Haku pairring instead of the same old Naruto/Hinata pairring hell make it different make it a Naruto/Hakuand Hinata pairring well that is if you will update the story
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2007 09:35 CDT
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Cool there was an update anyways this a pretty good chapter I just hope you would actually update more often I kinda doubt that but oh well just as long as it is updated thats cool so what is going to happen next will Haku look at Naruto differently now or will she be the same oh well PLEASE have them hook and become a couple from now on and when it comes time have the two of them hook up with Hinata lol oh yeah I just thought of something why would team 8 come looking for or bring Naruto back since Anko was sent out to find and bring him back so why would they need team 8 when Anko is out looking for him oh well PLEASE UPDATE SOON
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Reviewed By: Teioke Sheay [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 09:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!!!! i luv that Naru changes his hair like that! Anko sounds like a very patient person, though she really isn't.. Update soon!!!! ~TS~ later...
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 16:49 CDT
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Come on and please update soon it is sucks waiting so long for all the authors to decide to update because I got I thik 5 or 6 great stories I am waiting for to get updated but it seems the authors decided to stop writing for awhile please update soon because I love this story and this is one of the 5 or 6 I am waiting for
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2007 18:27 CDT
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I really really love this story I really hope this is will be a Naruto and Haku fic and not have them go different ways later on if that is so then this story sucks then again it would be really cool if they do go back to Konoda ad have Naruto and Haku both hook up with Hinata oh well please update soon and keep up the great work
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 00:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story! Keep it up and to Hell with the other fic that sounds vaguely like yours!.
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Reviewed By: ThisisJCarlosNg On: May 06, 2007 17:50 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This is the first time I see a NaruHaku fanfic and it is great! ^^ Just curious, but I was wondering how old they were...^^ Anyways, this was a great chapter and I know that the reviews you requested would be coming soon since this is such a great fanfic! ^^
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 11:06 CDT
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I think the term is "self-esteem" not "self of steam"
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 21:07 CDT
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Nice Chapter. I can feel the romance boinling.
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Title: kool
Reviewed By: soilder4love [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 18:58 CDT
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kool
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: soilder4love [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 18:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesioime write more
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Reviewed By: Juan Carlos Ng [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Chapter 10 is out! ^^ Thanks! By the way, if this is going to be a NaruHaku pairing fanfic, then, please make a OC for Hinata because I don't feel comfortable when Hinata is another character...I only agree in NaruHina but since this is NaruHaku, then, make it a HinaOC...Sorry, being selfish again... T_T
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Reviewed By: ThisisJCarlosNg On: May 03, 2007 22:08 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great!!! More PLEASE!!! ^^
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Title: awesome!
Reviewed By: god! On: April 24, 2007 20:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg this awesome now on my favorites list plase write if you keep going you might inspire me to satart writingnaruto again
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 02:30 CDT
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Plus, Yaoi for Naruto feels a little too much like pedophilia, ya know? These kids are like, between the ages of 12 and 15 when the series starts, maybe 19 or so after the time skip. It frankly seems a little freaky to be writing Sex for kids at such a young age to me. Even more so for gay sex (guys or girls for that matter). Neh, anyway, I love the latest chapter, write more soon!
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