| "Equality Naruto" Reviews/Comments [ 62 ] |
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 15:07 CDT
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I agree with spirit wolf. You should make this NaruHaku. Also you should make them go with Zabuza for training. Please reconsider the NaruHina pair! I KNOW I'm not the only one that wants a NaruHaku. Also, can you make the chapters longer and update soon please? Arigatou!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 14:26 CDT
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I really like this story and I love the idea of making Haku as a girl but the thing I was wishing you would do with your story is instead having the pairing Naruto and Hinata you should make it Naruto and Haku because you hardly ever see that pairing the only time you do see it is when ppl make Narutoto be gay and that is just wrong but with Naruto and a female Haku now that is a very very rare pairing so you should turn it into that pairing since it is a rare pairing please wither ways I will still like your story and I hope that you will update soon
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Reviewed By: lionspride [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 11:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story a lot, but you need to speed it up a bit. I can't believe you died his hair orange- Carrot-top. *lol* What's with this 'Sky' women anyway? Where are they exactly, if not in Snow or Leaf? Anyway, I liked how you made Naruto smart. A lot of people think he's just lucky that he has the kyuubi as power. They don't realize how cunning he really is. Keep it up. Update sooner, and LONGER.... Please...
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Reviewed By: Crimson Reaver On: March 10, 2007 03:34 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This story is very clever and funny. I think that he should meet Kyubi soon. I personaly like stories where Naruto and Kyubi get along and cooperate instead of Naruto having to suppress him and it being a burden to him. Still with how the story is going you can do what you like, I'll still like it. Please update whenever you can!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2007 14:50 CST
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Well that was a cool chapter but who is this Sky woman and also you say with doing short chapters you can update faster that is cool but would be really cool is if you do that hopefully you could atleast 2 chapters out at one time or 2 chapters in one dayat different times instead updating one chapter then couple of days or a week later just to update again so shorts are ok as long as they aren`t very short anyways keep up the good work oh yeah when will the Hokage how ever you spell it when will he find Naruto`s letter ok well I hope you will update soon
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 15:02 CST
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I thought this story is ok so far the only thing is to me is that this chapter kinda seemed short oh well I just HOPE the you will UPDATE SOON
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Reviewed By: The_Hybrid02 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 00:20 CST
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I myself am a little confused... does "Kage" refer to them being the leader??? And if so does that mean the sufix "Ho" refers to the village??? Please answer with a review! Your confused but understanding author! stupid japanese word... so sick of using wikipedia to understand.
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Reviewed By: Bookworm51485 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2007 22:09 CST
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You know if he mentioned being Hokage, it should be obvious which village he's from since only the leaf has a hokage. And I have to say, I find it funny that he'd find exception with being called short but not stupid:)
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2007 00:34 CST
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This story sounds lie it is going to be pretty good SO WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE IT
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 00:35 CST
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This story sounds like it will be a good one only if you would update it so please update the story
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2007 17:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this has potential. keep updating.
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Reviewed By: seilif [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2007 08:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
As many before, an overpowerd Naruto is something that has been done, but it doesn't mean that it's bad. The fic has a great start and the prank he pulled on Chapter 2 is great. Update as soon as you can, k? -seilif
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Reviewed By: djohnson [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2007 16:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good start so far, I like how you're making Naruto more serious, yet not so OOC that it feels like a different series. Can't wait for your next update.
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2007 09:39 CST
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I thought this fic so far is a good start and your right chapter 2 was short please update soon
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2007 19:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
A good start, though it needs more. Please continue the story, so we can see more of this weary tale you weave.
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