| "Equality Naruto" Reviews/Comments [ 62 ] |
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Title: awesome!
Reviewed By: god! On: April 24, 2007 20:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg this awesome now on my favorites list plase write if you keep going you might inspire me to satart writingnaruto again
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 02:30 CDT
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Plus, Yaoi for Naruto feels a little too much like pedophilia, ya know? These kids are like, between the ages of 12 and 15 when the series starts, maybe 19 or so after the time skip. It frankly seems a little freaky to be writing Sex for kids at such a young age to me. Even more so for gay sex (guys or girls for that matter). Neh, anyway, I love the latest chapter, write more soon!
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Reviewed By: RoseOfSand On: April 20, 2007 23:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a really good imagination I really think you should update soon and I know what you mean when you can picture Haku as a girl I thought he was when I first saw him keep up the good writing.
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Title: See! See! It's me again!
Reviewed By: Teioke Sheay [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 11:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Congrats on your new chapters..yes I took a while to review but I have a good excuse..okay.. no I don't.. anyway.. I love where this is going; is it going to be a Haku/Naru pairing? Awwww.. that would be so cute!!!Kawaiii!!! (< that means cut right?) But no, leave Hinata out of it! Nobody wants her ruining the Haku/Naru unless that's where this is going.. which I hope it is not..Hinata/Haku/Naruto? That's not right. But even if it is I have no doubt you could turn it into a good story.. I got's a question! Okay.. are you going to time skip? You know like Haku and Naru are going to go travel to Snow country and train, develop both their ninja skills, and then Naruto brings his 'grilfreind' back home to show off. That would be cool then they would both be more 'mature' -both ways poeple- and they would be seriosly going out? Now that would make for a great read.. haha.. Naru got a grilfreind and Uchiha doesn't or at least not someone as fine as Haku.. but I'm sure that's not where your going with this story. In fact you can forget I mentioned that. But are you going to time skip that part where they travel to Snow together and while they're their? Or are you going to write that all out? Oh.. and if you have already answered this .. I'm sorry.. I really only pay attention to who wrote it and the story! For now .. Ja Ne! Update! Update!
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Title: Opposite
Reviewed By: A_bigfoot37 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 00:57 CDT
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What is the opposite of fire, and think very carefully of all the traits that fire has, because it's those trait that it's opposite doesn't have. Especially fire's most obvious trait. You'll see what I'm thinking with a little thought on your own
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 13:52 CDT
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What about FLCL? I still love that insane goodness. "Haru Haru Haruno-san," has got to be one of the most random and awesome names ever. Heh. Anyway, I want to see more of this story, update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 11:52 CDT
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That was a pretty cool chapter and like I keep saying please make it a Naruto and Haku pairing or you could do what stalker said by making it a Naruto/Haku/Hinata pairingit is always good to have double the fun o so update soon and keep up the great work
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 01:52 CDT
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Screw Hinata! HAKU ALL THE WAY!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 01:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
update soon!
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Reviewed By: stalker On: April 05, 2007 10:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good story, please continue it soon. I say that Naruto should be with Haku and Hinata.
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 15:50 CDT
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That was pretty good and I still hope you wold change the pairing from Naruto and Hinata to Naruto and Haku please because I have read over a 100 Naruto and Hinata fics and I was lucky to read 1 Naruto and female Haku fic well until that damn FF.net stopped working for me so I have well somewhat read only 1 Naruto and female Haku fic it just seems like ppl only want to write the same old pairing for Naruto like Naruto isn`t good enough for different pairring yes Naruto and Hinata does make a great pair god why cann`t ppl be different by writing a story where Naruto is paired up with different female and not made to be a queer sorry abot that I just hate yaoi stories oh well if it is still going to be yet another Naruto and Hinata pairing I hate to say it but its just going to be yet another boring story oh well well I just HOPE that you will UPDATE SOON you can e-mail me if this review upsets you
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 14:42 CDT
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Please I hope you will update this story really soon and I hope you would actually change the pairing instead of the same old pairing that everybody is writing there is nothing wrong with having naruto paired up with Hinata god it just that nobody wants to write a story where Naruto is paired up with a different girl like Ino or Tenten and with your story you have it that Haku is a girl why won`t you pair those too up its different and hell I know you won`t find more the 3 or less stories with that pairing so pease make the pairing Naruto and Haku than the same old and now getting kinda boring pairing oh yeah please update soon please
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Reviewed By: eelvengirl On: March 24, 2007 23:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is really good! I do hope you'll update soon tho!
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: Teioke Sheay [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 17:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I lovin' so far... keep it up and don't take to long to update... yeah!
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Title: Clash
Reviewed By: A_bigfoot37 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 03:04 CDT
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Damn, this is now just a clash of opposite powers in one sleeping area. Fire and Ice, polar opposite elements, like Earth and Wind as well as Water and Lightning. No arguments either, Ice cannot be hot and Fire cannot be cold. Water is optional in those abilities. As opposite as they are, in the fact that fire and ice can burn and heal. With each physically touchable element comes an element that is physical impossible to touch but is able to feel. I'm rambling in my reviews again. Sorry. I say the whole fire and ice thing because the Kyuubi's symbolic element is fire. Read the Bijuu info from the Narutofan forums for more knowledge on Japanese legends. Hope for more.
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