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| "Choices of the Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: What do I think?
Reviewed By: MiraResQNU(too lazy to sign in) On: August 11, 2007 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
...I absolutely loved it! Thoughtfully crafted and expertly executed, the emotions were palpable and the details plentiful. I thoroughly enjoyed this fic and am so glad I found it. I love K/K ships as well, but the occasional E/K ship, especially when it is as well crafted as this, is quite the indulgence. Thank you! ^_^
| Reviewed By: Aylese1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 15:37 CST
Comment/Review:
You should continue this story. Maybe you should give it 1 or 2 more chapters. With that this will be a great story.
| Reviewed By: anon food On: February 08, 2007 23:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm usually not a Enishi/Kaoru shipper but this story made me take a closer look at the possibility. It was a different Enishi than the tragic man/supervillain I usually see. I like how you portrayed the characters, how relationships can change, how distance can affect different partners, and how sometimes feelings are just plain messy not matter what you rationalize or expect. I am curious to read the next part and find out what happens in both relationships. While I am curious of Kenshin's pov, I don't think this needs it if you keep it as a two part. You could certainly add more for more character and story developments ^_^ Thanks for the story.--anon food
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