| "Smoke and Mirrors" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: SmilingKitsune_13 On: February 11, 2007 21:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv you so much lol, and am so delighted that you put up something again. Your stuff is fantastic and can't wait to see what else you have in store for us because I remember that you always throw in a few wrenches and extreme plot twists that take your stories in a different direction than all the other same-ol-same-ol crossover plots. Thank you so much for being a fantastic writer
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Reviewed By: Kristie On: February 11, 2007 20:53 CST
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This is a really great story so far i really like it a lot and i cant wait to see what happends next so please update it really soon ok thanks tootles.
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 14:05 CST
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*grins* that entertaining
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 11:31 CST
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It's called "Smoke and Mirrors" and it's about deceptions so Hiei isn't Kagome's husband or the father of her kids? That's all an act? Looking forward to whatever comes next.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 02:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh you have to update soon please!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Rose Marie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2007 23:26 CST
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So glad to see you are feeling up to writing again. You've been missed. I'm looking forward to the next installment (whichever story you decide to play with).
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Reviewed By: Rose Marie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2007 23:25 CST
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So glad to see you are feeling up to writing again. You've been missed. I'm looking forward to the next installment (whichever story you decide to play with).
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Reviewed By: Hebi Youkai [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2007 20:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So happy to read this!
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Reviewed By: solqua [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2007 20:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay, you're back *hopping around the room*. I love that you are doing a hiei/kag pairing, there are not enough and you are such a wonderful author. I do hope you continue "by any other name" as well. Keep up the excellent work, you are my fav fanfic author and thank you soooo much for posting your work.
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Reviewed By: animeboysrock23 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2007 17:54 CST
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please continue is this a hiei/kag pairing if it is this is the best story that i read so far 'cause the rest may have mistakes but please continue i can't wait how the story turn out thank god it not a kurama/kag 'cause they are way too many of that pairings
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Reviewed By: Red Kitsune Flames (not logged in) On: February 10, 2007 14:22 CST
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This is awesome! I really love how they came across her, as well as how well you show Kagome and Hiei's intimacy.
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Title: Bare my children? XD
Reviewed By: Kira Bartholomew On: February 10, 2007 11:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always my dear, you get full 10's from me. You got me all excited now. Hiei has babies...from Kagome! XD I was all happy when I saw it was a new story, then I read the first chapter and it's like...it's not Kurama and Kagome? D: Maybe I'm just use to your other fic and the fact that you pull of that particular pairing so well. You are a skilled writer so I have decided new and different isn't bad. So I'm looking forward to the continuation of this one. I love a mother Kagome, so you sorta already have me on your side. The question that I wanna know is, did Kagome and Hiei meet in the feudal era or the modern era. :D Hope you update soon and hope your feeling well. ~Kira
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Title: Guruguru!
Reviewed By: Somnambulicious [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2007 09:25 CST
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Yay, you posted it! Hooray for subtlety! *LOVES* Oh, and I don't know if I mentioned this before, but the way the kids interact? Is made of WIN. You've got it down pat.
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Reviewed By: Latch [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2007 03:41 CST
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Oh, I'm so glad you're alright. :) I swear, I nearly had a heart attack when nothing but a cursory glance at the author's name in the email proved to be yourname. I had to double take, to be sure. I remember you saying you weren't well, before, and it's been so long. I'm soso /so/ glad you're alright.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2007 02:45 CST
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How wonderful! I was so delighted to see somnething new posted by one of my favorite authors. What an intriguing set-up, too. I like the way you're telling this story through Kurama's eyes and thoughts. So, have Yusuke and Kuwabara caught on yet? I couldn't quite tell. Are you going for a short story here , or do you have something big planned? I can't wait to see more of it! Thanks for posting!!
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