| "Not Moving" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: Kira
Reviewed By: Destenyne [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2008 16:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Matsuda should scream at the top of his lungs "I'm Kira I confess! I am Kira!" MAybe L would yell "Confession!!!!" and tackle him. Or "no you're no you deliscious cake you." Maybe Matsuda dresses him up to look like Misa.
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Reviewed By: DragonEmperess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2007 18:21 CST
Comment/Review:
I think you should have L, while still sleeping, suddenly attack Matsuda and start chewing him because he thinks that he is the strawberry cake from his dream and then he wakes up and starts working like normal, not even paying attention to the poor man he just mauled.
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Title: meh
Reviewed By: evanrose_ [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 15:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
i think the kissing idea is good, and L starts kissing back, then when he realises Matsuda isn't a strawberry cake wakes up and freaks XD
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: diablos42069 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 06:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
personally, I think u should leave it hear, it makes a funny lil short
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Reviewed By: WeepingDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 16:42 CDT
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ehhh..... that's have Matsuda-san look at Ryuzaki being all inocent and asleep, of course kiss him (how passionatly is up to you. i imagine Matsuda would be a little hesitant), and then Ryuzaki can wake up half way through and start kissing him back. Meheh..
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2007 11:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*starts looking around* *points to himself* I'm the first reviewer? OK. Here's what I think. have Matsuda let L sleep and try to solve the case himself. I'll review more as you update, so I can make ideas that follow the story line.
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