| "Castaways" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
Reviewed By: AnimeDoom [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2008 04:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I only found out about this Fic yesterday and it may well be the best thing I have ever read. The way Daisuke feels for Hikari but forces his emotions down is incredible, having expirienced a similar relation problem and using the same strategy to attempt to get over her I really connected with Daisuke and knew his pain all to well and the way you were able to transfer such a deep painful emotion into such an amazing story actually brought me to tears (which is no easy task). Please write a final chapter cause I must know the conclusion, will Takeru tell Hikari about his new found love and will Daisuke get the girl he so rightly deserves.
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Reviewed By: BelleoftheBall [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2007 05:55 CDT
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Another chapter pass and this still manages not to answer many questions :P Guess I will have to wait and see!
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Reviewed By: tenshi_tsubasa On: August 08, 2007 02:09 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wooohoooo yay an update :) I've read this fic not too long ago and....well, it was good. It was interesting, touching, cute, and funny all rolled into one. I'm glad that you updated this fic. You have a few spelling errors here and there but hey, other than that it was an awesome fic ^_^ plz continue writing
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Reviewed By: xYuuramx [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2007 19:04 CDT
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Wow, an update! I was almost going to give up on this fic.
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Reviewed By: Kirk Staley On: August 03, 2007 22:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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The latest chapter was very good.
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Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 20:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Well that was HAWT!!! I'm saddened at Davis' stupid condition, though. No sex? Who can live off THAT? (LoL!) I wonder now that TK's done the do with Saki, and Kari realized her feelings for Davis, when will they be rescused? And when will the skeletons come out of the closet?
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Reviewed By: gfhgnvbnbvn On: June 24, 2007 15:42 CDT
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Great story, much different from the norm. Can't wait for an update.
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Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2007 20:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm shocked that TK would cheat on Kari, and act so casual about it, too! But I don't care because this just leaves more room for more Daikari. I'm assuming Part 2 is the Daikari chapter. So, if TK and Saki made love in this chapter, does this mean Davis and Kari are going to make love in the next one?
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Reviewed By: Wing Guardian [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 20:48 CDT
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awesome story. keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Ace94d [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 17:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright, this chapter was full of utter win. ESPECIALLY random questions about Masterbation(Spelled it wrong, I bet)
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Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 16:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I forgot to say that the title of this chapter seems familiar... I don't know if it's from a fanfiction that I've read or not. Was this chapter inspired by something?
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Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 15:53 CDT
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I'm still curious what "H" word you was talking about. And, (as usual) I loved this chapter. I was cracking up so hard when Saki asked TK if he masturbates! That gurl is a TRIP! And I agree about the Cody and Rosa lemon. But anyway, and (as usual) the scenes between Kari and Davis were nice. At first I smiled, then at the end I wanted to give Kari a hug. I know EXACTLY how she feels! I've been in that same situation between two men, myself. (I made the wrong choice; LoL!) But I hope you can update as soon as you can. I love the length of your chapters! They just keep getting longer, and longer! And (hopefully) the next chapter to Teach Her, Teacher! should be out by tomorrow, or the weekend.
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Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's about damned time!!! I was wondering what happened to you!!! Again I loved the chapter!!! Especially when Daivis began to explain to Kari about the moon, gravity, and the tides being related. I can't believe she didn't know about any of that! I learned that shit in grade school! I don't really care if you add the lemon or not, (Iori's not my fave character, so I don't give 2 shits about him!) just give me more Daikari! And the little fantasy Davis was having about Kari was a nice touch. It makes me wonder if she's actually going to take a bath in the water...in FRONT of Davis, or at least Davis would be watching somehow and she's doesn't realize it. I don't care as long as she's naked and Davis is there to spectate!!! UPDATE...SOON...as in tomorrow soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Ace94d [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 15:35 CDT
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Yay! New Chapter!
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Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2007 11:25 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it. I'm looking foward to Kari and Davis being stranded on that island.
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Reviewed By: rage 2007 On: February 20, 2007 15:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey another great chapter. can't wait for the tk bashing though. keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2007 11:56 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!!! I really LIKED THIS CHAPTER!!! (Oh, yeah, FUCK TK!!!) I don't really agree with the bashing, but...if it's for the sake of the story, then it's ok with me!!! I can't possibly tell you how to write your story!!! Also, I really liked the Kenolie lemon scene. (You made me blush!!! LoL!) And when Davis was screwing his friend...oh how I desperately wanted it to be me...(sighs wistfully) Oh, well. If you're gonna continue this on ff.net, you might wanna up the rating, but edit out the lemon scenes. That way, this story can still be naughty, but NICE!!! LoL!!! And this is an excellent b-day treat for me!!! (Or I should say after-b-day-treat) I'll be on the lookout for the next update!!!
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Reviewed By: Ace94d [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2007 19:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Good Fic!
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Reviewed By: rage2007 On: February 12, 2007 15:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have a great story going here and i love the way you got davis acting. also i like the whole Tai Chi set up you got going. can't wait for the next chapter keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2007 08:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story already!!! Especially when Davis was describing to Ken about the art of Tai Chi!!! When he said that he could focus his energy on ANY part of his body, my perverted mind began to wonder does that apply to EVERY part of his body!!! He could could use Tai Chi, in B-E-D, with is P-E-N-I...ahh, you get what I mean. And I also like how Davis is ignoring Kari and TK's relationship. (what is there to pay attention to, anyway???) I strongly reccomend that you post this story on fanfiction.net (just edit out the upcoming lemon scenes). I'm sure SOMEONE will review it. I'll also leave a link in my ff.net profile. Hopefully others will read it, too!!! I DON'T CARE if I'm your ONLY REVIEWER...DO NOT abandon this story!!! P.S.: Also, try seperating the paragraphs. It makes it a little hard to read the story.
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