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Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2007 04:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
The plot/story line, etc is fine, but the spelling/word choice is really bad & this is just driving me nuts; it's toward NOT towered, you go toward something. Another correction is minute (60 seconds) instead of minuet which is both a type of music & a type of old-fashioned dance done to that music. Hope this helps.
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Reviewed By: squeefan On: July 26, 2007 20:57 EDT
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Yay! i like this story! im glad he's dead too!
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Reviewed By: Mrs. Kurama On: July 25, 2007 22:42 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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-rubs chin- Shadow Games in the Spirit World ...must be a Yu-Gi-Oh Yu Yu Hakusho crossover. -shruggs- anywho YESH THE DEATH OF NARAKU -takes out several bottles and barrels of sake- WOOT WOOT -chugs it all down...walks clumsly- i may just put ya on notice but ...-giggles- i enjoyed it!!! hahahaha they killed naraku and kagura (not from fruits basket but i would more than happy if they were both dead!) and kanna! (wouldn't be surprised if kanna was an emo in the modern times...) -dances around- yeah celebrate!! ^-^' NOW WHEN I COME BACK HERE THIS BETTER BE UPDATED YA HEAR! (well not really but update soon plz ...cause as you can see my cyber self is clearer drunk...and well not a pretty site...anywho update asap! and loved the chap. though there was a lot of injured but wth!) ^^' (in mind: i wonder if that font color thing worked....
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Reviewed By: Brightshadow4494 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 19:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update, i need to know what happens to them!!
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Reviewed By: Brightshadow4494 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 15:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please, please, please, please update soon. this story is awesome and i need to know what happens to them!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 05:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please I have to have more please
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Reviewed By: mrs. kurama On: July 09, 2007 22:31 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Thankyou i am ur loyal reviewer -bows- i l oved it... ^^' expiciall tht part with hiei and sango and when they fought those demons i was kinda confused...but they were actuallyin a big alley good job on the story and remember to review
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Reviewed By: jen9 On: July 08, 2007 23:31 EDT
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nice!!! keep writing plz :D u rock!
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Reviewed By: Mrs. Kurama On: June 02, 2007 20:07 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*woots* yes hiei/sango fluff!! And damn that Naraku! How dare he attempt to kill ji-san! And dont think he's dead i mean come on where did kagome get her miko powers other than kikyo and that old man is just to stubborn to die! "Demon be gone!" lol i just lovehim and those excuses he uses for kagome when shes not here. And to point out,again, this sentence right here "The rest of the group just got a few scars and scratches" well with the scars i think it really should be cuts cause scars are the remainings of cuts,scratches and wounds ya know what i'm saying. And yes one evil dude down 2 to go. And can u do like a surprising twist with kikyo not really being evil but she was possed or something but she truely was good and when she like dies or something she could reveal that. Now that would be awesome! Ok update now and i'm not mad anymore...lol... hah UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: Chikita [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 14:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your writing style is good, but your spelling needs a little work. I love your idea for the story though. ^.^ I'm enjoying this story very much. So you see my rating of a '9'. ^.^ ~Chikita~
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Reviewed By: Mrs. Kurama On: May 04, 2007 20:30 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
TT^TT... and i thought kurama and youko were stronger than that... man that Crece dude must be strong... *sighs* don't worry i won't shoot...i'll stab hiei's sword in your eye!!! Jk jk!... any ways FINALLY U UPDATED!!! and i enjoyed it... cept for the you know... anyways, i feel sorry for inuyasha and miroku their lovew are leaving them for a full demons...well if you can say kurama's a full demon... also uhmmm what was it... oh yeah why do u keep on spelling "Hey." this way "Hay!" as in the plant... just pointing it out and if plz if u can if ur gonna use bad words as in Shit, fuck, and uhmmm other ones spell them like this sh*t or f*ck... so tthat we can tell what ur typing...also hell n' ass arn't really bad words they're slang words so u don't really need to blure them... heh... and uhmmmmmmm update!... heh p.s. sorry i was to la zy to login -.-;
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Reviewed By: nikki01 On: March 25, 2007 08:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved the way u wrote the story..it keep me interested the hole time..and i think u done a very good job with the chaterters..and i hope u post more of it very soon!!
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Title: xD so happy
Reviewed By: Mrs Kurama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 01:54 EDT
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DIE CECRE DUDE DIE DIE DIE DIE AND DIIIIIIIIIE COME ON KURAMA BABY YOU CAN KILL HIM if not noooooooooooooooooooooooooooo okay over reacting lol i loved it escpcially with that part when Inuyasha blew up the pot lol update update update plzzzzzzzzz
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Reviewed By: DaishaOneechan On: March 21, 2007 21:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this and i cant wait till u update!!!!
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Reviewed By: Vagabond [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2007 00:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! I'm loving the plot twist of KUrama's possession and how it's not just solely focused on the endless cycle of the never ending "Find Naraku and kill him quest". The fluff in this chapter was adorable and i hope to see more Kagome/Kurama Fluff soon. Oh, one question, what the heak happened to Kohaku? Since he was revived he hasn't said a word and now he has disappeared completely! He'll be great for annoying the heak out of Sango and Hiei once they are a couple! ^^ Once again, GREAT job! ESPECIALLY for a first fan fic! Keep it up and update soon please! -Vagabond
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