| "Sounds of a new Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
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Reviewed By: naruto rules [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2008 22:10 CST
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the first rule of math and chemistry is that rin = kakashi. it is also the 27th rule of naruto
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Reviewed By: naruto rules [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2008 19:16 CST
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i have three name suggestions tenshigan(angel eye) kamigan(lord eye) makamegan(demon turtle eye) they all let you do hand seals in your mind. tenshigan lets you make wings out of the 5 different elements and kunai. the kamigan allows you the stop time for five seconds, control all magnetism within a 50 meter radius,and lets you grab on to the leftover chakra in the area to make invisible bombs or cause sink holes but you have to use hand seals(only for dojutsu related jutsus and summons. same goes for tenshigan and makamegan) makamegan lets you make concentrated chakra shields (like a turtle shell ,hence the name)and chakra blasts (like what he does in 4 tailed state except blue). he can also make cgakra claws(like kabuto) that can slice through air allowing him to manipulate wind and fire.he can also add elementents to the shield . he also gains a jedi mind trick-like ability of persausion. so there you go my longest review yet . almost a thousand words .
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Reviewed By: naruto rules [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 21:32 CST
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yes ayame should. she knows how to make ramen and that alone would make naruto marry her. also , if shizune is in konohagakure that would logiclly mean tsunade is already there.
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Reviewed By: naruto rules [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 20:10 CST
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it would make more sense to have naruto summon gamabunta with two hands instead of one
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Reviewed By: naruto rules [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 19:44 CST
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why don't you add sasame and isaribi
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Title: Neo Tenro
Reviewed By: Neo Tenro [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2007 18:47 CST
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your fanfic great, but i feel pity for naruto and how many girls are after him i lost count.
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Reviewed By: Wither [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 16:00 CDT
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This story is awsome.
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 02:00 CDT
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I knew it this story or your other one will never get updated whats new that seems how authors are these days oh well its to bad both of your stories are really good oh well
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 19:45 CDT
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This is a really good story and I wish this story would get updated but I am giving up wishing either this story or your other story gets update since this hasn`t been touched since what April and the other one last time that was updated was the beginning of June so I am giving up hoping it will be updated then again maybe the reason it hasn`t been touched is because writers block that is understandable but oh well there are other stories out there to read and also doubt they would be updated either oh well
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 11:32 CDT
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So far I really like this story but I have a feeling this story or the other one won`t be updated anytime soon heck I doubt it will even be updated again and that just sucks oh well whats new with authors these days
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 13:23 CDT
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OK now I guess I will have to beg now PLEASE UPDATE the story or both of them I love reading them both and man I feel sorry for Naruto when they get to the age to have sex compare to Ginshin hell Ginshin only has 7 girlfriends while Naruto probably double that and lol still counting and don`t forget he is engage to marry 3 girls hell on one hand I kinda wish I was Naruto but on the other hand I don`t having to listen to them bitch everyday oh well oh yeah and I feel sorry for Haku since she is the only one who cares about Naruto`s feelings hell she deserves to be kissed by Naruto I just hope she gets kissed in the next chapter thats if it gets updated because I kinda have a feeling this story won`t be updated anytime soon oh well PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 18:30 CDT
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Well I haven`t read all of the story yet but so far I really really like it heck I like both of your stories I just hope that you will update them oh yeah I loved it when you had Sakura turn Sasuke down big time when he asked her out to dinner lol you should make Sasuke become gay since I believe he is well that and I hate the guy oh wait bo down make him gay since every story I see where Sasuke is gay it ends up Naruto gets paired up with him oh sorry for rambling I really do like both of your storiesand I just hope you will update them soon
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Reviewed By: Death's Angle On: April 21, 2007 19:30 CDT
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This story is freakin awsome. keep up the good work. I think that Rin should go to kakash. It just feels right.
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Reviewed By: Wanderer of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2007 05:32 CDT
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the second choice
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Reviewed By: LancerLead [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2007 16:36 CDT
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Keep Kurenai with the womanizer. Rin and Kakashi just sings right to me. Keep up the good work!
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