| "Then and Now" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: If You Won't Update I Will!
Reviewed By: Princess Timbrel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2008 09:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
The grammar and conventions aren't that great but the idea and originality is extremely amazing. I read a ton of puppyshipping some have the Kaiba and Jou meeting at the orphanage but you're the only one I've seen with them being brothers. I love it! There is so many ways you;re story can go. Religous cults, dangerous gang members, a CEO's reputation, and odd relationsip with liking your brother more than as a brother. I hope this story isn;t something that is on put on the shelf for later and has been forgotten. If you don't plan on finishing this story can I? I'm the type of person when I love something I do it obsessively. At fanficton.net a lot of amazing authors like you start really coll and unique stories they never finish so after getting their permission I write fanfiction of their fanfiction. I've done 6 so far but you're the first at mediaminer I've ever wanted to do. Please please please please please email me at himebriny@gmail.com if it's okay to finish off your story at mediaminer and fanfiction.net I'll give you complete credit and link to the original Then and Now. So if you're into me writing fanfiction of your fanfiction please email me at himebriny@gmail.com with the subject 'Then and Now: Yes'. If you're not okay with it then email the subject 'Then and Now: No'.
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Title: UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!
Reviewed By: Anonymous Sister of the Author [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2007 18:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'M SO GLAD THAT YOU UPDATED!!!! i wonder...gozaburo must have had tapes of jou somewhere, right? what if kaiba found them? just a suggestion...well UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!! ASOTA
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Title: UPDATE SOON!!!!!
Reviewed By: Anonymous Sister of the Author [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 19:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i hope you update soon!!!! i want these misunderstandings to disappear!!! waaaaaahhhh!!!!
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Title: Wonderful!
Reviewed By: jou-kaiba-mokie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2007 23:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! update soon it seems like you confuse your "Y" and "J" other than that the plotline is great!
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