Title: Needs work Reviewed By:Ultima Key Blade Master 111 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2007 15:05 CST Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review: Umm its not bad but it could use a little work if you want i can help. There is however a catch if you want my help you have to let me use your characters whenever i want ok.