| "Any Woman, Anytime, Anywhere..." Reviews/Comments [ 73 ] |
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Reviewed By: Susan On: June 28, 2002 01:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel so sorry for Veggie. NYC can be pretty intimidating to a foreigner or a visitor from another state. Columbia U is in Manhattan. Native New Yorker that I am I grew up a few blocks south from it and as I recall the campus was pretty impressive. Anywho at least Veggie is gonna be a bouncer or at least try to. Let's face it, he's not exactly a people person ^_^. The two that he punched out at the university can testify to that. Can't wait to see what happens to him next. Good job!! |
Reviewed By: killarri [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2002 19:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked your story. Can't wait for the next chapter! :) |
Reviewed By: Cyd Charisse On: June 22, 2002 15:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ya akane! It's soo good, write more write more write more!!!!! post more often!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 02, 2002 02:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chap. Krillin seems to be in deep sh*t with 18. She doesn't look like she's about to forgive him anytime soon. At least G/CC are back together again. That dude Jesse made me think of Jeice, then again maybe I should stop seeing reruns of the Frieza saga ^_^. As for Bulma, my heart goes out to her, and judging by the last line in the fic, looks like she won't be finding Veggie for a long time to come. Can't wait to see what you have cooked up for the next chap. Again, good job! |
Reviewed By: Lucy On: June 21, 2002 16:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Um, I'm confused. How can Bulma be 2 months pregnant with Vegeta's kid, when she just slept with him that week? Did I miss a passage of time somewhere? |
Reviewed By: Cherry_Saiya-jin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2002 16:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Exceptional work. I enjoy reading this fic very much and would be pleased with an update very soon!Keep up your good work!
Bon chance,
~``~Cherry~``~ |
Reviewed By: Shateera40@hotmail.com On: June 21, 2002 12:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, gurl! Wussup? Ur chappies great and I can't wait 4 da next! Bulma should be happy bout having Veggie's baby! I know I would, but Bulma is a very emotional character. ~sighs~ Veggie betta be sad right now 4 usin Bulma! Make his ass miserable! lol. I'm crazy so holla @ me @ my e-mail or instant messenger cuz ur fic is off da hook!!! Sume suggestions for websites. Fanfiction.net will be up soon so register there and post ur fic and you'll get a hell of a lot more reviews then u get here |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 21, 2002 10:09 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, great update! So Marron thinks her and Veg belong together...she's quite the delusional bitch. I'm glad it's out in the open and that Krillin and Goku have paid the price for it. Can't wait to see what Veggie's reaction will be to Bulma's pregnancy. Update soon ok? |
Reviewed By: xangeliz91487x [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2002 09:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey everyone!!!! ijust wanted to say, thank you for reading my fic...i'm gonna be a lil slow on updates (lol, jk cyd charisse), but i just wanted everyone to who review to tell them thank you soooo much!!!!!
~n. |
Reviewed By: cyd charisse On: June 20, 2002 07:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
um wow that went.. fast. keeping going akane. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 19, 2002 01:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Knew it! Can't wait to see what CC and 18's reaction will be to the bet. I have a feeling Goku and Krillin will be in deep sh*t! |
Reviewed By: Chibi-Dacras babysitter On: June 18, 2002 15:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would have given you an hundred...but that's impossible. I'm reallllllllllyyy looking forward to the next chapter when it comes out, this is awesome and held my attention the whole time I read it...that's hard to do, so keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: nani On: June 18, 2002 21:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohmygod,that was soooooooo good.u HAVE to finish writing the next chapter,cause i wanna find out what'll happen next.keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Shay On: June 14, 2002 23:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic one of the best out of the billions read. So please update soon and don't leave it hanging! Vegeta is the best! |
Reviewed By: xangeliz91487x [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2002 20:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
who the hell is cyd charisse~hm...ukyo??!?!?! |
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