| "Any Woman, Anytime, Anywhere..." Reviews/Comments [ 73 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ukyo On: June 07, 2002 20:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL LOL LOL!! lookie Akane!! lol I loved it! it's funny as hell to even think u could write a lemon!!! lol heehee!!!
~Ukyo / Susan/ Angel |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2002 14:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well you most certainly delievered. Good job. So does this mean that Vegeta wins the bet? If so what will Bulma say when she finds out about it. Speaking of Bulma why is she going out with Yamucha?! Is she crazy. Well I guess she is. Anyway good update.-JB |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 06, 2002 22:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
We asked, you delivered! Loved it and I hope it doesn't stop there. B/V were meant to be together again, so I don't understand why she wants to go out with Yamcha. Can't wait to see what happens next. Ja |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2002 01:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is shaping up very well. If you've read any of my fics you know I'm always up for some Good Old Fashion V/B Lemonade but it's your fic so do what you feel makes the fic flow. Til next update.-JB |
Reviewed By: serendipity [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2002 20:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! hehe. I vote for the lemon! If can't have that them at least a little citrus. ^_^ I think you should make marron and 17 go out, then make her cheat on him with yamcha, who trys to go out with bulma, but vegeta beats up yamcha before he can. hehe I am going way to far into this... O.O |
Reviewed By: Bulma-chan On: June 01, 2002 06:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I LUV IT!!! LEMON LEMON LEMON!! LOL ^_^ WRITE MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 01, 2002 04:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chap. Looks like B still has the hots for V. I think a lemon would be good. Those two have some catching up to do ^_~. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 01, 2002 03:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the first dbz college fic I've ever read. I loved it. I didn't know that was called raving but it makes sense. So the guys have made their bets eh? Let's see who comes out on top ^_~. |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2002 23:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like! I really do. College that's a new one. And I always up for a good old fashion put-your-money-where-your-mouth-is bet. Keep up the good work.-JB |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2002 03:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I usually review chapter 4 chapter. I didn't know that was called raving. I like this chapter too. Can't wait for the next one. |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2002 03:08 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like it!! A collegue fic, that's new. Interesting bet, to get bulma. I thought it might be a regular. But it's different, good job!! Okay next chapter... |
Reviewed By: Vegetas Gyal [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2002 19:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
I liked it! Great idea, though I honestly don't think that Chi-Chi and 18 should've gotten mad at Bulma. She IS pregnant after all, and 18 and Chi-Chi are the ones being bitchy, but hey. Who am I to critisize? Anyways, great chappie. ^_^ *Off to read chapter 10...* |
Reviewed By: cosmicvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2002 20:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please! Put some lemon! Please! Oh and great story |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2002 22:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
heyyyy! i like the outfit you put vegeta in, that sounded really delish ;) your story's great! cant wait to see what happens next! |
Reviewed By: Shateera40@hotmail.com On: June 27, 2002 19:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo,wussup? Anyways I luved this chappie, I just want Veggie 2 find out that B's pregnant or 2 know what's on Bulma's mind. I mean I bet she's got alot of stuff on her mind!lol. Yeah, I'd luv 2 have V's child! No doubt!lol. But I am a crazy bitch!lol.I mean he's just sooooooo fine!!!!! Can't wait 4 da next chappie!!!!!! |
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