"through his eyes" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: I liked it! Reviewed By: Yaoi-Freak1990 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 03:45 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: That was pretty good, I liked it! Language kinda scared me, but it was a good story. They are cute together. Why did you end it? I wanted to read more. Email me! Why????? I loved it! Please write more.
| Reviewed By: Mad Maxx Coyote [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 22:35 CST Comment/Review: This is a pretty interesting story. I look forward to seeing where it goes. One minor problem though, it was kind of hard to tell who was saying what. More so in Chapter 2. Good job none the less.
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