| "Envy" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Rapier On: January 13, 2010 16:49 CST
Comment/Review:
I really liked this--very nice. I would have liked to see it fleshed out as...like a shorter one-shot. It's almost as if a drabble doesn't do it justice, like the limits are too short to really show off everything this idea has to offer. But you've done it well as it is now. *nods* I enjoyed reading it.
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Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: FieryPen37 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2008 22:30 CST
Comment/Review:
So short! I wanted it to keep going. I love your style, quick, concise(unlike me) and emotional. I enjoyed it.
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Title: Short but sweet
Reviewed By: hopelessly_demented On: May 22, 2008 11:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brief and straight to the point yet a sweet story nonetheless. Though I do believe you give Vegeta more humanity than what I would give him - a small nod acknowledging his son would have been enough for the proud Prince (since he appears to dislike 'unnecessary' bodily contact, hahaha). Nice work.
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