"Ying Yang" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Mukuro [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 09:34 CST Comment/Review: Again, congratulations... You sure are a great writer, I enjoy you style of writing.
In this fic, the sex was great... but I don't know, concerning the relationship part, I believe you could have made both pilots... well, more aware of their feelings for each other... I mean, they had things with other people, was that just curiosity? I guess I didn't catch that part well.
Oh, it sounded like Nikita, I liked. Heero and Duo are perfect for the job. Ever tought about doing a 3x4? That could be nice.
Excelent work. Congratulations, I loved. Now I'll read more of your fics... | Reviewed By: Ladye Black On: November 28, 2002 19:42 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: This fic was really good! | Reviewed By: Hidama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2002 19:48 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: hey, very nice. Thanks for the fanfic... I enjoyed the details, and you were very creative with this story. thanks. |
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