| "Don't Make Me Kill You" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: Caitlebug [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2010 16:16 CDT
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UGH! Too good to end there!
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Reviewed By: le Bert On: August 27, 2007 15:13 CDT
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Your story was completely hilarious. The alphabet cunnilingus, the lip-balm lube, the random Miradona reference, the overall screwball machine-gun banter, fantastic. I very much endorse your vision.
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Reviewed By: ichigo987654 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2007 10:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Everytime I think of Aya frantically applying lip balm I go into hysterics!!! TOO funny!!!!
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Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2007 15:39 CDT
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I really do adore your Ken. I do. Also, Aya getting turned on by an angry Yohji was quite hot. I'm equal parts afraid and eager to see Aya's attempt at...dealing with the woman.
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 19:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Such sharp humor and insight, mingled with just the right amount of angst and heat. Each moment is just perfectly written. Although the portrait painted of each character is quite distinct, you make us empathize and understand each one all so well.
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Reviewed By: RS On: August 23, 2007 00:53 CDT
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"He's just trying to help...violence is not the answer"...as usual, the snappy dialogue courtesy of Ken is *hilarious*, I laughed so hard I about wet myself on this one. Thank you for another wonderful chapter !
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Reviewed By: glinwulf On: August 23, 2007 00:12 CDT
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Yay! A new chapter for one of my favorite fics. Don't make us wait so long for the next one.
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Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 16:01 CDT
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lol, this was a great fanfic like all your others, so keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 06:50 CDT
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i'm not sure what amused me more...ken's attempt at flirting with the lady, yohji's abrupt dismissal or ken's and yohji's conversation about aya's *ahem* abilities...wonderful job as always!
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 20:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Funny as heck, hot, surprising (but Aya is not only stunning, it is easy to see how his questions about her interests would be more attractive than Yohji's very well delivered pick up lines), and a simply perfect turnabout and chapter!
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Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 10:21 CDT
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And Yohji gets a dose of his own medicine! Well, sort of. I wonder if it makes me odd to find the dry humping in the kitchen scene cute and endearing.
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Reviewed By: deunank [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 13:28 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, the angst! Amidst the hilariousness of it all. Poor, poor, stupid Yohji. Ah well, he deserves it all, methinks. I love the nickname! So very appropriate for Yohji to think up.
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Reviewed By: StarTrekObsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 17:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh, WOOHOO! I was mildly crushed when Let's Get It On ended, and now look what I found- a sequel! It's awesome, and just as funny and well characterized as the first one. Thank you, and keep it up! :D
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Reviewed By: RS On: March 25, 2007 17:08 CDT
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Excellent, as always. You should consider giving seminars on Character Development Through Dialogue, it's a rare talent and one you've honed nicely. Smut=good, story=good; both good at the same time = almost never happens, so thanks for kicking it up a notch. Oh, and thanks too for the *first* Ken who is actually a person (cf: character via dialogue, above), usually, he's my first vote for euthenasia, but *here*, I like him...a lot. More, soon, please please ?
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Reviewed By: Aya&Yotan On: March 24, 2007 15:06 CDT
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Excellent story! The fisting scene is thrilling but too small ;-). Looking forward for sexy continuation ;-)))
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