| "Don't Make Me Kill You" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 06:50 CDT
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i'm not sure what amused me more...ken's attempt at flirting with the lady, yohji's abrupt dismissal or ken's and yohji's conversation about aya's *ahem* abilities...wonderful job as always!
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 20:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Funny as heck, hot, surprising (but Aya is not only stunning, it is easy to see how his questions about her interests would be more attractive than Yohji's very well delivered pick up lines), and a simply perfect turnabout and chapter!
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Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 10:21 CDT
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And Yohji gets a dose of his own medicine! Well, sort of. I wonder if it makes me odd to find the dry humping in the kitchen scene cute and endearing.
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Reviewed By: deunank [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 13:28 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, the angst! Amidst the hilariousness of it all. Poor, poor, stupid Yohji. Ah well, he deserves it all, methinks. I love the nickname! So very appropriate for Yohji to think up.
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Reviewed By: StarTrekObsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 17:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh, WOOHOO! I was mildly crushed when Let's Get It On ended, and now look what I found- a sequel! It's awesome, and just as funny and well characterized as the first one. Thank you, and keep it up! :D
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Reviewed By: RS On: March 25, 2007 17:08 CDT
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Excellent, as always. You should consider giving seminars on Character Development Through Dialogue, it's a rare talent and one you've honed nicely. Smut=good, story=good; both good at the same time = almost never happens, so thanks for kicking it up a notch. Oh, and thanks too for the *first* Ken who is actually a person (cf: character via dialogue, above), usually, he's my first vote for euthenasia, but *here*, I like him...a lot. More, soon, please please ?
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Reviewed By: Aya&Yotan On: March 24, 2007 15:06 CDT
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Excellent story! The fisting scene is thrilling but too small ;-). Looking forward for sexy continuation ;-)))
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Reviewed By: gretel_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 20:01 CDT
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This is so good. I'm enjoying how you have Yohji and Aya interacting. Ken is fun too, you write him very very well. Looking forward to more!
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Reviewed By: the butler [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 08:39 CST
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erm, my review will be sounding pretty off... love the title! first parts made me laugh, never knew ken had it in him to be l.o.l funny.
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Reviewed By: wedjateye [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2007 02:51 CST
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Damn them for angsting so well. I feel all sniffly. I suspect there may be a few more bumps ahead before sense comes knocking. I so love that bathroom scene. And Yohji's husky declaration of corset-kink/love for Aya through the door. I'm really glad you're writing a sequel. As I said once before, I feel like I could keep reading this story forever. Hopefully that can be arranged!
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Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2007 11:11 CST
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I am so very glad you decided to make a follow-up arc! And you start it off so well, totally grabbing the reader's interest and refusing to let go. Totally understand what Aya's going through...poor thing... I do hope they manage to patch things up soon. Then again, knowing them, it probably won't be too easy... >_>
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Reviewed By: deunank [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2007 00:57 CST
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wah! Now I want to beat up Yohji. When did he get so clueless? Poor Aya. He should beat Yohji up. why yes, violence solves all emotional problems. :| Anyway, delighted to see this sequel appear!
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Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2007 18:55 CST
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::sniffles:: These two have problems. Please make better. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2007 23:44 CST
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me like ver very much so please write more kay. thanxs
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Reviewed By: gandadiyosa [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2007 22:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
bad yohji! poor aya, *sniff. now make it all better or else, kudoh! oh i love it! write more when u can!
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