"Pokemon: The Next Generation" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Demon of RHS [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 11:21 CDT Comment/Review: ok so far, but you lost me when you switched to third person. fortunately I found my way back.
| Reviewed By: inu 4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 06:09 CDT Comment/Review: This story was beautiful.. i love this story..
| Reviewed By: Hideto-Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 18:23 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: I like the concept and the plot seems interesting! However, the extensive dialog should be back up with narration (like the first chapter)Anyway keep em coming!!
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