| "Give It To You" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: sadistic_crayon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2002 02:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was pretty good, I liked the end remark very much.
Just one thing though? Lube? Gay guys really do need it or they get rubbed raw.
*floats away to happy lemon land* |
Reviewed By: KuriQuinn On: November 10, 2002 08:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very...interesting.
I don't usually read lemons, but I'm a pretty big 1X2 fan...keep writing.
It was cute the way you made Duo seem shy...
and that was a side of Heero I don't think I've read about for a LONG time
Godd Work
KQ |
