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| "The Villain, The Trap, and The Twist" Reviews/Comments [ 1 ] | Reviewed By: MetsukiKaraTen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2007 18:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GAH!! Although I know the circumstances for which this bit was written, and it is literally CRAWLING with author's notes... I can't help but wonder where it will go. Love your detailed descriptions (as always) and I think you did well in showing how effective a multiple POV can be, providing it is handled with care. Personally, when reading the work of others I have found myself literally tugging away from the singular POV, needing to gain additional perspective on the events at hand. Granted, too much perspective can ruin the element of surprise, however not enough can make the progression of the plot cumbersom, lumbering, and in those instances I (having the attention span of an amoeba) will walk away. You kept me with this, and damnit I am anxious to see more of your work here!! More than some midstory slice just to prove a point. (Ok I'm over it... NEXT!) MKT
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