| "Eternal Triangle" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: rychefan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2012 05:38 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i do hope you come back and finish this one day i love the way you write |
Title: really good
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2011 20:29 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the interaction between b/v. This is a really good story. I'm surprised u didn't get more reviews. |
Title: PLEASE!
Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2008 04:57 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finish it. Its been almost 2 yrs write something.
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Title: PLEASE!
Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2008 04:56 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finish it. Its been almost 2 yrs write something.
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Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2008 03:29 EDT
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an interesting take on Jane Eyre. I am loving this story, and your dark twisted depiction of vegeta. i can't believe he did that to bulma though, after she saved him as well. I wonder how she will act around him, i'm sure it must have brought back memories of her father.
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Title: prologue
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2008 02:47 EDT
Comment/Review:
hmm i wonder what will be in store for Bulma on vegettesei
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Reviewed By: Jiggle [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2007 10:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing, I really love this! Theres some mistakes, and as said by someone else, some of the sentences don't make complete sense, but overlooking all that, it is fantastic. If you got those fixed, then this would be even better. One thing though that I didn't particularly like was that, she just seemed to blurt out about her years of abuse, and her past with her Father and Yamcha, when she had only been there afew weeks. But other than that its great, and its definately going on my favourites, I would like to see how this all ends ^^ I hope you write more!
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Title: Finally!!
Reviewed By: lafemmevegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2007 00:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been waiting for you to work on this forever. Thank you for those 3 chapters. Please update soon so we can find out what happens the morning after.
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Reviewed By: vcelestialgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2007 21:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic so far. Although I did encounter a few mistakes and occasionally some sentences didn't make sense. Nice though.
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Reviewed By: bulma-veggie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 06:33 EDT
Comment/Review:
Great story , i will be looking for an update! I especially love the references to Jane Eyre in chapter 2.(I hope I am not saying any mistakes!^^)
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Reviewed By: funnyduckie1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2007 19:28 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really GOOD FIC!! keep going with this fic...
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Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2007 00:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon. i love this.
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Title: amandajune
Reviewed By: June16458 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 00:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story
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Title: Catreena
Reviewed By: Catreena [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 01:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nicely written. I really like this story and can't wait for you to update.
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